Hannah

Hmm, I won't address the rest of the comments you made immediately because its late, I just wanted to address the last one. When I wrote this poem, I felt ...

My responses to your... yes, you get it! Bahaha~ I vote for Mrs. Maveo (and for Mr. Maveo as well, for George), then, if they don't show up later. This ...

Long-ish? Reaaaallllllyyyyy? I'm going to divide my critique up much the same way as you divided up your chapters, if you don't mind. These will just be first impressions, I'll ...