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Re: He Lusts For Imperfections Even Now: a sestina.
First of all, I just feel the pressing need to congratulate you for going through with such a challenging structure and managing to pick the right mix of words. You ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Viva La Vida
Here as requested, Conrad! n____n I. Little Things. I sweep the dust away from the steps of the temple, the temple that once was mine. Haha, you did this in ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Pruit Igoe and Prophecies
^___^ Look! I'm here! I. Little Things. The electronic banks of my brain reach on for miles in this place. The dust has gathered, yet my diodes still blink true, ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Blue Lightning's Light
Hey, Jon. Sorry for the delay! D: I'm horrible, I really am. :C After reading through this once, I have to admit that the message kind of escaped me. I ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Pirouette's
Hey there! I'm Hannah. ^_^ Well, let's get right down to it. The first time I read through it, I could definitely feel some of the emotion behind it peeking ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Blood
^_^ Hey, Lizzie. I think it was Lizzie, right? Oh, forgive me if I'm wrong. D: Anyways, after reading this through ONCE I get a really nice image. I can ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Never Know (Rock)
^_^ Here as requested, though I was about to stop in anyways. =D I. First Impression Alright. After reading this through once, I was left with a solid message. It's ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Avrils Academy Of Cosmic Stars
^_^ Hi there~ Welcome to YWS! Make sure that you review a few other members' works soon to try to keep to the 2:1 review:posting ratio. C: Anyways, let's see ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: Talking of Michelangelo
Moomars~~~ Oh, so is this a reference to The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock by T.S. Eliot? -gigglefits to self- The title just happens to remind me of that. ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (8)
C: I'm here. Caught up! -claps- I. Little Things Something empty and mindless and untargetable breeding in the germy shadows. Alright, this is going to need some clarification. D: You ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (7)
Sorry for the delay on these, Kylan! I was getting my wisdom teeth out.
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Reasons to Move (1)
Clo-twin! It's review party time! :smt026 I. Little Things Her scrunched up grinning freckled face was in the papers and, every morning for a few weeks, mothers shook their heads ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: DELETED
Hi! I'm Hannah! I. Little Things Up until now I had chocked it all up to independence, my ability to be self reliant-but in all honesty I knew there was ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Anything...
=D The first thing I notice was something my advanced creative writing professor has drilled into my class and that is that the use of your extra fluff is distracting ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (6)
=D Back for more~ Phoebe Winston sat in the cusionless chair with her hands kept neatly in her lap and her spine erected severely. *cushionless But also... 'erected severely' is ...
Mar 11, 2009
