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Re: Losing Touch (ii)
I. Little Things The children playing barefoot, boys with stripped, pink chests and the girls in the thin, dirty dresses. Why do you use 'the' to describe the dresses? Are ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Losing Touch (i)
Kylan!
May 4, 2009 -
Re: What I Did During My Summer Vacation:
Helpful McHelpful! =D
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: the day after a murder
Hey, there! ^_^ Welcome to YWS~ I'm Hannah. It's nice to meet you. C: Anyways, let us get down to it, shall we? The story you've woven here is really ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: This morning before you drove me to work, I noticed that:
Here we are. Finally. xD I'm so slow~ >_< I see you've gotten a bunch of good advice, so I'll just pitch in my two cents. ^_^ but still at ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Black
Hey, BlueShift-nametwin! ^_^ I see you've already done 3 reviews, so I figured I'd stop by and give this piece of yours its own review! ^_^ I. Little Things I ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: By Any Other Name
Hey, Helpful McHelpful Pants! xD Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. Busy with school, you know.
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: What May Shimmer
Hey, Tanner. I. Little Things As if visage of winter to the summer has been sold. I think that if you wanted to keep with loading this line with syllables ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (12)
:cry: That was me not wanting this to be the end. Now, this is me critiquing! I. Little Things Mathis stood waiting, Shaffer beside him, holding a shotgun. Who was ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (11)
-claps- I. Little Things Mathis woke up to voices. At least it was not a gun. There were thin mottled skins of the moon shuffled off on the floor – ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (10)
=D Nooo, it can't ever end. Don't even say that! I. Little Things David Weiss woke up with a hand over his mouth and a gun in his side. And ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: The Court of Gilded Birds: cheeseball fantasy extraordinaire
Here as promised. n_n Sorry it took so long. -sob- I. Little Things It was glorious summer in the palace, though spring chill and dampness lingered on the city walls: ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (9)
Harrah! More! n___n I. Little Things Lill pushed aside her curtains and looked out across the street at the Fulsons loading up their truck with crotchety furniture and hasty boxes. ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: with the sweat of your brow (2/2)
I. Little Things, First Time Through. He will imagine that he knows it. I love this. I think that THIS is what the minimalist kind of writing that you're going ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: with the sweat of your brow (1/2)
Sorry it's taken a few days for me to get to this, Kylan. >_< I. Little Things, First Time Through where they will pass out the picking bags and take ...
Apr 3, 2009