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Devlin asked, scrambling to his feet as Amarro, Soltoro, and Gobi rose up around him like sleepy ghouls draped in blankets. This was such a fun and strong image. I ...

Hello! Nice to meet you! Congratulations on your first work posted here on the site! Are you usually a poet versus a story writer? Or did YWS inspire you to ...

That logic was convincing for exactly twelve seconds, then she was pacing again. This is what it feels like when you spook yourself at night in the kitchen, that someone ...

Hello! Review Day brought me in, and although I haven't read the other chapters, I hope my impressions of this piece can be of some help! First, I was really ...

God, this is so hard to read. I just want to say what sticks with me the most is the wonderful way you make the narrator feel like they are ...

They can't fix it by writing a letter that says "no we didn't hurt you we just loved you what are you talking about". I am especially intrigued by the ...

Yes, yes, yes. This is going somewhere and is almost there. I love the images you choose to focus on: the milk and honey oozing from the cracks, the shine ...

Hello, Spatula. Your title and description drew me in. Your ideas are keeping me here. I'd really like to see this poem worked further, and here are aspects I think ...

You mention that the meaning of this poem is left up to the reader, so I'll tell you what it means to me. It means that I feel like I'm ...

Hmm. I really love the format and idea of this poem, but something is bothering me about the formatting of the sentences in between. If I take them into one ...

Hmm, this is a really interesting image. First of all, your poem starts out very strong. I love the description of how you felt in summer -- I feel strong ...

Oh my goodness, I loved this part the most: The air is sleepy "alright everyone up." The air is excited "shh!" The air is sleepy -- that is exactly the ...

Hello there! I was pleasantly surprised by how accessible this piece was. I was hooked by the line "Something in me was finally ready for the end of the story" ...

Hello! I'm going to share a few pieces of feedback about this essay, and I hope they will be helpful to you. First, what is the main idea of the ...

Hello! I'm going to leave a few of my first thoughts after reading this prologue. First, I really like the setting and some of the feeling that courses through this ...