Hannah

:D Thanks for the good advice!

The guilt of me knowing her secret gnawed at me like a termite, working its way slowly from my head into my heart. Feel free to expand whatever simile you ...

I think it's awesome that you've even been able to recognize this and want to do something to stop it. xD I find myself throwing bits of myself into my ...

Writing is something I've kept pretty private until recently. I still don't really share it much with my close family -- I think it's something about sharing private things with ...

For the last one, I think there's a rule that you should only slip dialogue tags in the middle of dialogue if it's where a natural break would be. D:

Intro I think that poetic devices are the most amazing things I've come across in my experience with reading, analyzing, and writing poetry. If you've ever taken an English class ...

1. Grade systems? What grade are you and how old are you when you're in the "Seniors" Seniors are twelfth grade and they're usually 17 or 18 year old people. ...

Thank you, heh I haven't actually looked at it other than grammatical errors that I changed. Really? I must watch that ha ha. I just made it up as I ...

Erm, hello! ^_^ While I find your work intriguing and the concept of 'train of thought' is very useful, it is really considered common courtesy {and actually a rule, I ...

I have just one more thing to add! I love semi-colons~ ^_^ Semi-colons are also used if you have a list with items that contain commas, like if you were ...

I have a lovely little book that I think I gave to a friend and need to get back, but it's called Elements of Style by William Strunk Jr. and ...