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Re: The Bee-Loud Glade by Steve Himmer
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Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
Plastic wrapped around your delicate fingertips reminds me of ash.
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Manila Bay
Hello! Thank you for posting these pictures. I'm going to make recommendations, but I have no technical knowledge, so you may have to fix some things on your own or ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: My Best - Photography
I really like the balance in a lot of these, especially the lines in the architectural pictures. The first complaint that I found was in 'Wild and Free' -- it ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: The bells. By Poe.
I. LOVE. this poem. I love reading it aloud. If you haven't, you should!
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Dramatic vs. Lyric
From my understanding, lyric poetry is more about sensations of nature, landscapes, general feelings and emotions, while dramatic poetry is about showing one person's point of view. Don't worry about ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Five Quick Poetry Tips
That's a good one as well, Sealegs! Thanks!
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
I keep wondering why my skirts ride up between my legs and why I keep having to pull them down every three steps, because I don't walk around and watch ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Five Quick Poetry Tips
I've been going through the poetry articles in the knowledge base, and I found that some of them take a really long time to say something simple, which means few ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
he says he's afraid to get his hair cut because when the movies play and the heroes cut their hair, it means they're hiding or warping or dying. for the ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
well this tea is nice but what I really want is some candy from that man dressed up as the easter bunny because he can't show his own face. I ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: stick in the lake
Yes, please resize! Another thing I would suggest is experimenting with different kinds of lighting when you take nature pictures. So, this exact stick might not be there, but try ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
he is the camera box, though her lense is fragile. but why is he so unbending? is there no give around her curves; why won't he hold her close? why ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
"i found your earrings. look in the bells above the door." i looked up at arcs i'd never seen before and saw them hanging -- they were red and pretty, ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
i hear the stiff walls sucking up your voice and turning it into cement. it's gritty, it's hard to listen to you and create something good out of it. maybe ...
Mar 29, 2010
