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Re: "and your phoenix tongue" -- Hannah's NaPo 2013
April 4th for Cadi: i. What do you do when you're just too scared? When your wrists aren't held by ropes but by tangles of neurons crossed like stars? to ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: "and your phoenix tongue" -- Hannah's NaPo 2013
April 4th worked: incandes toasted and honeyed and prescribed zinc pills to get the cold out but walking under a thousand miles of blankets, time is still dense. you will ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: April Madness
This is for you. famous thin walls pastactions imprinted in the wallpaper and in the wooden floors and in the gaping doorways between rooms. i can hear through the floor. ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: "and your phoenix tongue" -- Hannah's NaPo 2013
Thanks, Audy. (: April 4th unworked: famous thin walls pastactions imprinted in the wallpaper and in the wooden floors and in the gaping doorways between rooms. i can hear through ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: Alf's No-Alliteration Thread for NaPoWriMo 2013
Oooohh, good point, Hannah dear, thanks! Although, I was actually pointing out that both the girl and the lonely cloud up in the sky is His, so, well yeah I ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Audy's Awkward Adventures
I told the nurse the trouble with not knowing where you're from is not knowing how to express your pain all you end up is the hung open silence of ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Sparkle's Strange Stanzas
I like this: My hair, the spiders did bequeath; Their webs to catch the dew. But I somehow liked it more when I thought it was a human and not ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Lava's non-alliterating 'InPoWrimo' thread title.
Like a scarecrow in a crop circle ahh!
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Nargle's NapoWrimo corner
Frenzy excites the businessman, Red stains keeps the wife up late. What? Oh my god. So weird. You could interpret this in so many different ways, this poem. I love ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Pigeon cannot writ poam.
write more about your mom making you angry!
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: "and your phoenix tongue" -- Hannah's NaPo 2013
April 3rd worked: interior oil-painted fin(ger)stains on the curtains. i cannot see beyond the brocade tinder-driftwood -- deep brown thread sewn back and forth obsessed until the rest of the ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: "and your phoenix tongue" -- Hannah's NaPo 2013
April 3rd unworked: amiss my sisters are fingers half-burnt on the plastic of microwave dinners that we brought in bags slung over the handlebars of bikes swaying off balance three ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: SkyeJane's Red House Ramblings
It's gorgeous, Skye. I especially love these moments: Everything two shades too yellow Because colors are so strong, and this emphasis works well. Or be able to taste trees on ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Penguin's Poetry Palace
I lie outside in the heat and leaves where my skin boils red and thick so you cannot see through. yeah, girl. i love you!
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Rydia's Repository
You are so awesome, Rydia. I love hickety-pickety, and I love the little fragments that are so punchy in the rabbit dad poem. ahhhh.
Apr 3, 2013
