Hannah

It's cold where I am, but your poems make me forget.

I just get a happy feeling knowing how much you are going to love looking back on these and have them evoke the emotions of your memories!

I don't think I told you how much I like the guy fawkes poem, but I am also enjoying the feathers and waves from the last poem.

I feel like I want to dig deeper into tangent. I feel like there's more hiding there. :) I really liked your entry for April Madness, by the way!

4's premise is so clear. I can hear it and feel the space it fills!

So, I. was like delicious and then III. was like a delicious JOURNEY, and I want more confectioneries from you this month!

open wound mouth < make me hold my breath while i read your poems, why don't you?!

only time and silence. :( hi, in case you are reading this and you are not old, this is what it means ^^^^

yaaas always extra poems! i liked the line about "us in trees" and how dangerous that felt in a poem all about lightning.

april 6. 향수병 - perfume sickness - homesickness bald rock-headed mountains sit as caps above high-rises, starlight muddled with gold leaf apartment windows: a pollution i cannot collect that hang

april 6. pommed with @Autumns and @PenguinAttack desire in two keys could it be that I am the monsoon rocking the venetian blinds, my existence a reversal of seasons, or ...

april 5. back-side of the beach: a lake superior love song how long has it been since you came here? i have long studied limnology and still drown in the ...

april 4. constrictor i look back on the ability to form phrases in a language my father knows. my heart flies tangential to words once worn as bald or brilliant ...

april 3. KakaoTalk_20170404_143744884.jpg

Our shadows stretched across the lawn most at dusk, the sun retreating from the leaden sky. yummmmm.