Hannah

^_^ I'm writing what I hope to be a series actually, otherwise it would be a veryyyyy long novel thing. -shifty eyes- Ahm, anyways, it's about a baby who speaks ...

I definitely agree with you. A while ago, I thought about it but thought how cumbersome it would be to carry a book/paper/something everywhere with me. I'm kind of weird ...

Long-ish? Reaaaallllllyyyyy? I'm going to divide my critique up much the same way as you divided up your chapters, if you don't mind. These will just be first impressions, I'll ...

^_^ Welcome to YWS! I'm a newbie here as well, but I just wanted to pop in and give a quick welcome since I appreciated the welcomes I received earlier ...

Uhm. Hannah, I reccommend you don't brag on YWS about your photos. Especially photos that are blurry and in bad clothing because well, they'll tear you apart. People here don't ...

Oh god, how beautiful! We've all been there, I'm certain, at one point or another, and this is just a beautiful outpouring of those feelings. My favorite part; All my ...

Aside from the lack of full-stops in this poem, which I think should be remedied to make it more readable, I have just a few comments. ^_^ behind the fish-faced ...

We may now see what the newbie looks like! ^_^ She's slightly narcissistic, so this thread was a 'must-post' sort of thread. o_O; Ahhh, and she admits it... and is ...

Ahhh, there are more of these amazing boards?! Followed your featured story from your profile, and here I am, about to request for you to take on my baby. She's ...

^_^ Mind if I slip some opinions in here? Under these personae the elements of the heart: are truly at war, are in harmony, are in vain, are completely insane ...

^_^ Oh, LOVELY. I'd love however harsh of a critique you'd like to give the beginning of what I hope will be my masterpiece. It's my baby and usually I ...

SO! CUTE! I love it because I could definitely see what was happening after I got to see what the work was going to be about! ^_^ Definitely very cute. ...

Of papermache and of plaster paints. The hands brush the knobaly railing. -Those hands that are not mine, But borrowed for tonight and the next, Till I become weary of ...

^_^ Let me help some! ^_^ I /love/ this premise. I was sitting on the city bus. I didn't know exactly where I was headed, but I just felt the ...

^_^ Can I help too~ I often wondered if he felt the same way as me, if he laid in bed every night thinking about my smile the way I ...