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Re: "Ballerina" The first Chapter (edited)
Squee!!! Ballet! ^_^ Here are some suggestions from a friendly Hannah who is deeply in love with ballet~ They wore bright colors and danced their hearts out. This act was ...
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Re: Unhappily Ever After
-stalkstalkstalk- The least I can do, right? ^_^ Jacqueline de la Faye saw her hypnotize the Prince at the ball, and bit her lip until it bled to keep from ...
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Re: Report a good member!
Please, I must tattle on the lovely members who welcomed me on my welcome thread -- Rosey Unicorn, Night Mistress, Icefire63111, and Merry_Haven. ^_^ Thank you! I'd also love to ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Are you writing a novel right now?
^_^ I'm writing what I hope to be a series actually, otherwise it would be a veryyyyy long novel thing. -shifty eyes- Ahm, anyways, it's about a baby who speaks ...
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Re: "There's nothing common about a commonplace book"
I definitely agree with you. A while ago, I thought about it but thought how cumbersome it would be to carry a book/paper/something everywhere with me. I'm kind of weird ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Nevestory Academy {Working Title} {Long-ish?}
Long-ish? Reaaaallllllyyyyy? I'm going to divide my critique up much the same way as you divided up your chapters, if you don't mind. These will just be first impressions, I'll ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Longhunter08
^_^ Welcome to YWS! I'm a newbie here as well, but I just wanted to pop in and give a quick welcome since I appreciated the welcomes I received earlier ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Uhm. Hannah, I reccommend you don't brag on YWS about your photos. Especially photos that are blurry and in bad clothing because well, they'll tear you apart. People here don't ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: I wish i was part of someone too.
Oh god, how beautiful! We've all been there, I'm certain, at one point or another, and this is just a beautiful outpouring of those feelings. My favorite part; All my ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: free flow
Aside from the lack of full-stops in this poem, which I think should be remedied to make it more readable, I have just a few comments. ^_^ behind the fish-faced ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
We may now see what the newbie looks like! ^_^ She's slightly narcissistic, so this thread was a 'must-post' sort of thread. o_O; Ahhh, and she admits it... and is ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: I'll have a review extra value meal,
Ahhh, there are more of these amazing boards?! Followed your featured story from your profile, and here I am, about to request for you to take on my baby. She's ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: SOCIETY:The Ultimate Masquerade
^_^ Mind if I slip some opinions in here? Under these personae the elements of the heart: are truly at war, are in harmony, are in vain, are completely insane ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Need a review? Click here!
^_^ Oh, LOVELY. I'd love however harsh of a critique you'd like to give the beginning of what I hope will be my masterpiece. It's my baby and usually I ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Zel
SO! CUTE! I love it because I could definitely see what was happening after I got to see what the work was going to be about! ^_^ Definitely very cute. ...
Jan 19, 2009
