Hannah

^_^ Hello. I don't know how much you'll be able to expand this, as I don't know your word count limit or how much this current piece is shy of ...

^_^ My favorite cat is named after Icarus, so I couldn't pass up reviewing this poem! ^_^ What fool Icarus for trying to be a man while clinging tight to ...

I'm seeing either a story about some Rosetta-stone-type language thriller or a fantasy based on a quest to a stone in some distant location, protected by a charm, with lots ...

^_^ Hallo, Merry~ Here I am, as requested.

Haha, the Mr. Nobody poem was quite entertaining actually. ^_^ ^_^ Alrighty, so here are my suggestions as to what you can do with your requirements! ^_^ Hopefully there is ...

Hmm, I won't address the rest of the comments you made immediately because its late, I just wanted to address the last one. When I wrote this poem, I felt ...

First of all, darling, I'm so sorry for your loss, but no matter what it truly wasn't your fault. Regrets will be felt at any death -- things that 'could ...

(Like what each line has to be). Polkadotted Lion Curious and cunning Breaking things then running Simply shunning. ~~~ I'm not really expecting many replies to this, but if you ...

^_^ I'm no expert with poetry, but here are my suggestions! ^_^ A little fact of life went wrong, A little fact, but its grip was strong. I'd suggest taking ...

^_^ Hallo, I'm Hannah. Nice to meet you. Hopefully my review will help a bit, though I know you don't intend to make it into a story. “What, mother?” A ...

^_^ Not an expert on poetry, so hopefully this can prove to be a little helpful, and if not, my apologies! Do you know the real damage you have done? ...

So, I don't know if you're looking to do anything with this piece, as you say it's from your diary, but I feel like critiquing all the same, because it's ...

^_^ Hallo, Shina! Here are some suggestions for you! The sound of treading black stallions on the rocky paths chased us everywhere we went. 'Treading' seems a rather lackluster verb ...

My responses to your... yes, you get it! Bahaha~ I vote for Mrs. Maveo (and for Mr. Maveo as well, for George), then, if they don't show up later. This ...

I just finished a book called Song Quest, by Katherine Roberts. It was okay, but there were a lot of cliche similies and some parts bored me, so I skipped. ...