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Re: Shine Bright, Little Baby
So, I had logged off for the night when I realized that I'd forgotten my Norton Anthology of British Literature Volume Two somewhere and I needed to get back online ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Adour
Hello! A few comments from someone who's no expert on poetry but loves to read it! ^_^ I will journey through your tears; into the dark night of your soul. ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Cold-Blooded Kill
This poem has the potential to be really great. I don't mean any offense at all by this, but just from reading it through once, I think it would be ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Town of Dissident
^_^ Hiii, I'm Hannah! I stopped by just to offer a few comments. First off: first impressions. I get the feeling there is a LOT of back-story to this scene, ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: "There was no possibility of taking a walk that day.&qu
Goodness! When did all these posts get here? Haha, I don't think my email was watching this board very closely. -growls at email alerts- Yes!!! I strongly urge you to ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Mutts - Home
Hi love! Here as promised!
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: My Guardian Angel................ Prologue
^_^ Hello~ Just a few suggestions. I'm Hannah, by the way! I agree with the previous comment about taking out the ellipses. I think that if you used the correct ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Paradise Island (2)
Yay! Part two~ Here are a few of my comments! ^_^ Her back was turned to me, so I couldn’t read her lips. Ash, who rarely talked anyway, barely moved ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Paradise Island (1)
Because I saw you posted a second part, I wanted to come back and read the first! I have just a few comments/suggestions. I still have the scars of where ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]
Banned for having one more review than I. ;=;
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]
Banned for living under a rock and not with me. :C
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Winter Suite
'Lo, Gahks. Great to see another piece of your work. I have just a few comments. My first impression that I get from this poem is that, because of the ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Title Feedback
Reminiscent of a book I've heard about, but haven't gotten the chance to actually read -- it reminds me of 'Child Called It', about terrible, horrible things that are done ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Background Check Center
PublishAmerica is a total scam of a publisher. And that my friends is from personal experience with them. :shock: Is there any way that you can elaborate upon this, please? ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Mat's Reviews
'Lo, Insomnia. I would /greatly/ appreciate it if you'd take the time to wade through the beginnings of my 'Nevestory Academy'? I realize it's rather long and there's quite a ...
Jan 21, 2009
