Hannah

^_^ Hiii, I'm Hannah! I stopped by just to offer a few comments. First off: first impressions. I get the feeling there is a LOT of back-story to this scene, ...

Goodness! When did all these posts get here? Haha, I don't think my email was watching this board very closely. -growls at email alerts- Yes!!! I strongly urge you to ...

Hi love! Here as promised!

^_^ Hello~ Just a few suggestions. I'm Hannah, by the way! I agree with the previous comment about taking out the ellipses. I think that if you used the correct ...

Yay! Part two~ Here are a few of my comments! ^_^ Her back was turned to me, so I couldn’t read her lips. Ash, who rarely talked anyway, barely moved ...

Because I saw you posted a second part, I wanted to come back and read the first! I have just a few comments/suggestions. I still have the scars of where ...

Banned for having one more review than I. ;=;

Banned for living under a rock and not with me. :C

'Lo, Gahks. Great to see another piece of your work. I have just a few comments. My first impression that I get from this poem is that, because of the ...

Reminiscent of a book I've heard about, but haven't gotten the chance to actually read -- it reminds me of 'Child Called It', about terrible, horrible things that are done ...

PublishAmerica is a total scam of a publisher. And that my friends is from personal experience with them. :shock: Is there any way that you can elaborate upon this, please? ...

'Lo, Insomnia. I would /greatly/ appreciate it if you'd take the time to wade through the beginnings of my 'Nevestory Academy'? I realize it's rather long and there's quite a ...

^_^ Hello. I don't know how much you'll be able to expand this, as I don't know your word count limit or how much this current piece is shy of ...

^_^ My favorite cat is named after Icarus, so I couldn't pass up reviewing this poem! ^_^ What fool Icarus for trying to be a man while clinging tight to ...

I'm seeing either a story about some Rosetta-stone-type language thriller or a fantasy based on a quest to a stone in some distant location, protected by a charm, with lots ...