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My perfect autumn days My cozy winter laze I gave you too much of me. And in the end it scares me so To know I gave, and even though ...

Does anyone out there think I'm worth it? Would anyone listen to every little petty plea To every worry, every bit of self-condemning pity? These days I feel like curling ...

What happens now, when I fall? You said you would catch me But now I see clearly This claim was conditionally Made. It's alright, I suppose. I can hide away ...

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Georgia

Thank you, heh I haven't actually looked at it other than grammatical errors that I changed. Really? I must watch that ha ha. I just made it up as I ...

Erm, hello! ^_^ While I find your work intriguing and the concept of 'train of thought' is very useful, it is really considered common courtesy {and actually a rule, I ...

This is such a sweet and moving piece -- I really like it. ^_^ My first impressions were only warm and fuzzy feelings inside. Teehee~ Well, of course, except for ...

I love writing poems in the heat of emotion -- that's the only time I feel like I ever write anything worthy of even being called poetry. ^_^ It's a ...

^_^ Hallo! I'm Hannah!! ^_^ Hehe~ I'm no expert on poetry, but I have found that I like reviewing and critiquing it, adding my own suggestions, but you're free to ...

Ahahaha. I love it! I absolutely love it~ The first thing I'd have to comment on would be the use of 'P.S' instead of 'Post script'. I mean, you'd think ...