Hannah

^_^ As I'm reading this through for the first time, I just want to point out my delight in finding certain sentences and lines that actually rhyme quite nicely. Hehe, ...

Hallo, Evi! Since you so kindly took the time to look at some of my pieces, I thought I'd critique a few of yours as well. ^_^ First of all, ...

Hello! Trying my best to get this particular short story ready for an Advanced Creative Writing class. >_< I am currently reworking the fourth chapter as it was a large ...

Hello again, Evi! ^_^ So, this has absolutely sothing to do with the last installment, not to mention nothing to do with caterpillars, pulverized or otherwise. I'm going to have ...

You know you're a writer when, for a lack of paper, you start a bit of writing in a text message on your phone and save it to drafts for ...

:oops: Yeahh, I found out after I'd flooded that it wasn't such a good idea. I think excitement and eagerness to spend the points I'd saved up sent my good ...

Hallo, Clo! Thanks so much for the review. ^_^ ~ I had been considering changing the first sentence to 'had planned it all out' anyways, so I will definitely do ...

Thanks for the review, Jordan! Eeeps, and sorry, Snoink! For some reason I had this thing in my head from how they rate movies and that they are allowed to ...

this is good, just wheres the punctuation? Besides for the odd period i didn't really see any. besides that, great job. you could really feel the emotion in the words ...

I just wanted to let you know that this was so poignant of a poem when I first read it that I marked it down in my blog to remember ...

Hello! ^_^ I meant to respond to this the first time you posted it, but I got sidetracked. Anyways, I really love the tone of this poem -- I can ...

Banned for having a signature that implies 'leeches' are bad. :C The animal-things, that is.

Thanks for reviewing Carly! ^_^ I definitely see what you mean about the awkward transition in the priest's thoughts and how it's not clear that we're talking about the husband ...

Thanks my novel is fantasy, but there are horses involved, they don't play a very big part though. My current WIP, Black Diamond, is all about horses. I don't have ...

Hello, HR! ^_^ Welcome to YWS! You'll surely be in good company here~ Let me lay down a few little rules for you. These are the two most important ones! ...