Hannah

Well, I find that when I give critiques, most of it is obviously my opinion! Everything that anyone says, you are free to disregard or to listen to -- it's ...

This poem tells how easily trust can be broken ^^ I like it. The word flow on some of the stanzas are a little bit, rough. Try picking words with ...

7/10 I like the idea but I don't like the purple! Teehee~

You have a very nice writing style, I might add. With a little added description, and a slightly broader plot, with more attention to detail, I can see this story ...

=D Ahh, I'm so happy! I get to turn this in for class next week, so it's good to get reviews now and have a solid base to build the ...

I have more people to tattle on!! :'D Anti-pop for being a sweet heart and reminding me of Popsicles and holding a cool contest! Evi for following my WHOLE patchwork ...

This song was awesome. I made a kinda heavy melody for it. I think you would have liked it. The emotions you brought were really strong in away. The rhyming ...

To tie up the whole caterpillar thing (which we never found out about, might I remind you) you could mention a butterfly! That would be epically awesome. Her whole transformation ...

Call me Sana. Hannah made me come here. =O :D :D :D :D :D Look, it's my name!!! -points at it-~ Yayyy, welcome, Sana~ Here are the two major rules ...

=D Yay~ Evi's still here~ I haven't killed her with horrible writing yet! *At this point, Evi tries to restrain herself from breaking her promise to Hannah and rambling about ...

Ah, the joy of a quirky introduction paragraph. Very Happy Kudos to you, my dear. This was enjoyable. Oh, silly, fickle Charlotte, always in denial. Rather than accepting her hopelessness ...

Eeeee, yay, Evi! Haha, I read all of your reviews on each piece before coming back to respond and edit {well, before I plugged in my laptop so I'd feel ...

^_^ As I'm reading this through for the first time, I just want to point out my delight in finding certain sentences and lines that actually rhyme quite nicely. Hehe, ...

Hallo, Evi! Since you so kindly took the time to look at some of my pieces, I thought I'd critique a few of yours as well. ^_^ First of all, ...

Hello! Trying my best to get this particular short story ready for an Advanced Creative Writing class. >_< I am currently reworking the fourth chapter as it was a large ...