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Re: Eulogy
Moomars! It's writing! Omgoshness!! ^_^ Haha, so I have to tell you that while I was reading this poem, I was in a singing mood and ended up reading it ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1 of what I hope to be a novel
^_^ Hello! I'm Hannah! I saw this piece and decided to give you a little review of it. C: Welcome to YWS, by the way! After reading it through once, ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: American schools?
1. Grade systems? What grade are you and how old are you when you're in the "Seniors" Seniors are twelfth grade and they're usually 17 or 18 year old people. ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: where i'm from
Hello! I'm wondering if this was an assignment for a class or something? >_< I hope it is, because it's /super/ similar to 'Where I'm From' by George Ella Lyon! ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Prototype World
Hallo! ^_^ I'm Hannah! I'm no expert on constructing poetry, but I like reading it, so I'm going to give you the opinion of a reader. xDDD Hehehe~ First of ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: I'm new...sort of
Hey! I've seen you around! And know that you hate when people think your avatar is a pirate! ^_^ I'm Hannah, and I hope to see you around some more.
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Among the Infidels (1)
^_^ Hi, Sam! I'm Hannah! I saw this work on the front page and I felt like seeing some of your writing. C: I have to say, this was BEAUTIFUL! ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: -poofs in- Come Meet Me, I'm a Lot of Fun!
Hi! ^_^ I'm Hannah! Welcome to YWS! I also just wanted to point out another quick rule which relates to the rating system. If your work has any graphic scenes ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Into the Giant's Land
Hello, again! ^_^ I definitely like it a lot better now that you've edited it. It just seems a lot smoother and easier to read through, but you still kept ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Background Check Center
As a result of this, Barnes and Noble has released a statement saying that they will not sell ANY PublishAmerica books. o_o; B-b-but her book is being sold at Barnes ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: song for society
^_^ Hello, Lexi! I /really/ like this poem. I appreciate the way you change up the form sometimes, too! It sort of adds to the ever-changing mosaic of what is ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: China Doll
I like this poem! I think that there are some things you can change about it though. ^_^ For example; I hit the ground Then you walked away. I don't ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Into the Giant's Land
^_^ Hallo there! >_< I accidentally read the spoiler before reading the whole thing, so that kind of ruined it for me. I mean, the story wasn't ruined, but I ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Steelers Won!!!
I thought the Doritos commercials were hilarious! I only watched the commercials between critiquing and then the last part of the game! =]
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford, Prologue
^_^ -waves- Hello, I'm Hannah~ Might I provide a few comments? ^_^ After reading this short bit through ONCE, I sort of like the premise of the story, but I ...
Feb 2, 2009
