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Re: Between heaven and Hell
Hi! I'm Hannah! I. Little Things Up until now I had chocked it all up to independence, my ability to be self reliant-but in all honesty I knew there was ...
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Re: Dialogue Grammar
For the last one, I think there's a rule that you should only slip dialogue tags in the middle of dialogue if it's where a natural break would be. D:
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Anything...
=D The first thing I notice was something my advanced creative writing professor has drilled into my class and that is that the use of your extra fluff is distracting ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (6)
=D Back for more~ Phoebe Winston sat in the cusionless chair with her hands kept neatly in her lap and her spine erected severely. *cushionless But also... 'erected severely' is ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Biology Help, Please? [Punnett Square Troubles]
:oops: Sorry I didn't explain it well enough. Thanks for helping clarify though, Teaguerz. ^_^
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: New Day
I like this poem. It's profound and relevant! ^_^ Just one little nit-picky thing: believing it to be the rarest of all treasures? "Believing it to be" is, to me, ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Biology Help, Please? [Punnett Square Troubles]
Hey, Jared! ^_^ 1. First of all, let's go back to the beginning. =] If you are going to cross a TtRR plant with a Ttrr plant, we're going to ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Hey everyone! I'm new :)
Hi, Firman! ^_^ Welcome to the site. ^_^ I'm Hannah~ In addition to what Meep said about rules, be sure to rate any works you end up posting, okay? ^_^ ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Trapped within my own skin
=D You get my 100th review! Yay for Nutty! =D I. Little Things I had been here before. Not only among the trees, with birdsong all around- but in my ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Depressionville Hotel
^_^ I really like this poem! I read it through once and had to note it in my blog to be sure to come back and give it a proper ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: The 'Shift' Key
Why would you even use the capslock button!? Who teachers that!? I even sometimes end up just holding down the shift key for a whole sentence in capitals, you know? ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Skies Descending
Hi, CBF! ^_^ It's been too long since I've popped in on one of your works, so I'm here now. ^_^ For a moment, the sun forms a perfect halo ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: To Elma (1)
Hey, Clo-luff! ^_^ -huggles- I. Small Things At the conclusion of the affairs, everything seemed too hazy to consider. I'm not really a fan of this sentence -- it's kind ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Memoir; Networking
Hey, I'm back for one more round! Just a few more things I caught. Sorry I've taken so long to get back here. >_
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Secret Treasures in Poetic Devices
Intro I think that poetic devices are the most amazing things I've come across in my experience with reading, analyzing, and writing poetry. If you've ever taken an English class ...
Mar 8, 2009
