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Re: Just need a little help with a Simile...
The guilt of me knowing her secret gnawed at me like a termite, working its way slowly from my head into my heart. Feel free to expand whatever simile you ...
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Re: Too Much of Myself
I think it's awesome that you've even been able to recognize this and want to do something to stop it. xD I find myself throwing bits of myself into my ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Harassment: Good or Bad?
Writing is something I've kept pretty private until recently. I still don't really share it much with my close family -- I think it's something about sharing private things with ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Between heaven and Hell
Hi! I'm Hannah! I. Little Things Up until now I had chocked it all up to independence, my ability to be self reliant-but in all honesty I knew there was ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Dialogue Grammar
For the last one, I think there's a rule that you should only slip dialogue tags in the middle of dialogue if it's where a natural break would be. D:
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Anything...
=D The first thing I notice was something my advanced creative writing professor has drilled into my class and that is that the use of your extra fluff is distracting ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (6)
=D Back for more~ Phoebe Winston sat in the cusionless chair with her hands kept neatly in her lap and her spine erected severely. *cushionless But also... 'erected severely' is ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Biology Help, Please? [Punnett Square Troubles]
:oops: Sorry I didn't explain it well enough. Thanks for helping clarify though, Teaguerz. ^_^
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: New Day
I like this poem. It's profound and relevant! ^_^ Just one little nit-picky thing: believing it to be the rarest of all treasures? "Believing it to be" is, to me, ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Biology Help, Please? [Punnett Square Troubles]
Hey, Jared! ^_^ 1. First of all, let's go back to the beginning. =] If you are going to cross a TtRR plant with a Ttrr plant, we're going to ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Hey everyone! I'm new :)
Hi, Firman! ^_^ Welcome to the site. ^_^ I'm Hannah~ In addition to what Meep said about rules, be sure to rate any works you end up posting, okay? ^_^ ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Trapped within my own skin
=D You get my 100th review! Yay for Nutty! =D I. Little Things I had been here before. Not only among the trees, with birdsong all around- but in my ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Depressionville Hotel
^_^ I really like this poem! I read it through once and had to note it in my blog to be sure to come back and give it a proper ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: The 'Shift' Key
Why would you even use the capslock button!? Who teachers that!? I even sometimes end up just holding down the shift key for a whole sentence in capitals, you know? ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Skies Descending
Hi, CBF! ^_^ It's been too long since I've popped in on one of your works, so I'm here now. ^_^ For a moment, the sun forms a perfect halo ...
Mar 8, 2009
