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Re: Something in the Water
Hey, bby. I'm finally here -- light years after you requested, but I'm still here. xD -nom- I. Little Things I could have put the urn on that but it ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: "For what are we if not defined by words?" || CLOSED!
So, I'm nearly caught up with all those requests and I'm ready for more! Please be sure to read the rules when you request a critique. Thank you! -Hannah-
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Wyndolyn
Hello, Dakota! I can see that you've already gotten a lot of good feedback on this piece, so I'm just going to read through it, comment on things that stick ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Fantasist (Revised)
Hey, Zanna. I suppose it's kind of lucky that I took so long getting to your review that now I'm able to look over the revised version, right? I hope ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Heaving Ardor
Hey, Baile! I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to get to this, but I'm hoping you could still use some advice on this piece. :] If not, let ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 1}
Hey, Shina! My apologies for not getting to this sooner. >_< Had a lot on my plate. But hopefully you're still looking for feedback on it! I'm going to just ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: I'm semi-new, in a way
Hahaha~ You guys are ridiculous! xDD I love Mr. Weasley's fascination with Muggle objects. oO; He's probably the silliest character ever. xD But, on a different note, I totally get ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Hola!
Yay, Maddy! ^___^ I have actually heard of a few of those series! The His Dark Materials series is one that I loved a lot when I first read it, ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: rawr. i am a dinosawr.
You have a parenthesis voice!? You are officially my hero, then. I wish I had a parenthesis voice. Do you know if they sell them anywhere else? Ebay? Amazon? And ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
I've only got time to review one more poem of yours now, Kylan, because this time it's 4:30 in the morning and I'm starting to feel dizzy. windmills along the ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Leave with Spectrum Shades [Accidentally Bumped]
Silly Evikins, thinking I'd pass up the opportunity to read some of her work and offer my comments. I know it's taken a while for me to stop by and ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: Death's Sunset
Hey, Rosey. My apologies for taking so long to get to this poem. >_< I hope that you still need some feedback, since I see you've already gotten several comments ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye
Hey there, Palip. My apologies for taking so long to get around to reviewing this. Hopefully you can still use some feedback. Let's see what I can do! I. Little ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: I'm semi-new, in a way
Hey, Ima! {Do you mind if I use that for your nickname? It's short and sweet, I think. xD} Welcome back to YWS~ We're definitely glad to see you back ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Hi, I'm new...
Weare! I loved your poem, and I thought I would stop by your welcome thread. Firstly, you should let me know if there is a specific name you'd like us ...
Jul 15, 2009
