Hannah

I would just like to encourage you to avoid having all your action happen in the flash backs. Be sure to have some action happening in the current world as ...

Hey, Deemah! Welcome to YWS! Your story is very inspiring, and it reminds me and everyone else that even when we get really harsh criticism, we have to take it ...

Hey, Gahks. :] Sorry that it's taken me a little while to get to this, but I'm here now and hopefully I can offer some good feedback. I don't really ...

Hey, bby. I'm finally here -- light years after you requested, but I'm still here. xD -nom- I. Little Things I could have put the urn on that but it ...

So, I'm nearly caught up with all those requests and I'm ready for more! Please be sure to read the rules when you request a critique. Thank you! -Hannah-

Hello, Dakota! I can see that you've already gotten a lot of good feedback on this piece, so I'm just going to read through it, comment on things that stick ...

Hey, Zanna. I suppose it's kind of lucky that I took so long getting to your review that now I'm able to look over the revised version, right? I hope ...

Hey, Baile! I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to get to this, but I'm hoping you could still use some advice on this piece. :] If not, let ...

Hey, Shina! My apologies for not getting to this sooner. >_< Had a lot on my plate. But hopefully you're still looking for feedback on it! I'm going to just ...

Hahaha~ You guys are ridiculous! xDD I love Mr. Weasley's fascination with Muggle objects. oO; He's probably the silliest character ever. xD But, on a different note, I totally get ...

Yay, Maddy! ^___^ I have actually heard of a few of those series! The His Dark Materials series is one that I loved a lot when I first read it, ...

You have a parenthesis voice!? You are officially my hero, then. I wish I had a parenthesis voice. Do you know if they sell them anywhere else? Ebay? Amazon? And ...

I've only got time to review one more poem of yours now, Kylan, because this time it's 4:30 in the morning and I'm starting to feel dizzy. windmills along the ...

Silly Evikins, thinking I'd pass up the opportunity to read some of her work and offer my comments. I know it's taken a while for me to stop by and ...

Hey, Rosey. My apologies for taking so long to get to this poem. >_< I hope that you still need some feedback, since I see you've already gotten several comments ...