Hannah

Hey, Layla! The idea behind this poem is really sweet, and I can tell that it means a lot to you, or you wouldn't be writing about it. I do ...

Hey, Sureal. So, I'm assuming this is part of something that will have more than one part, and that's good, because it leaves me wanting those other parts. Right now, ...

It feels incomplete and rushed. ... The end result, then, is limp. ... but none of them felt original, it came across as quite generic. ... we didn't end up ...

Down for ripping up and rewriting.

Hey, Captain.classy. Now, I'm no sonnet-expert or anything, but I have learned a thing or two about rhyming and metered poetry in my attempts at it, and I'm going to ...

Hey, Nike! So I have a couple of big points that could make this little essay better. First of all, you need to proof-read. That's one of the first rules ...

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I'm here, Kylan! I told you I would be here, and I'm tired of not doing what I say I will do. D: I. First Impressions The overarching thoughts that ...

:D It's a cardinal, guys. And these pictures are great -- I love the fire hydrants especially because they have great color. You positioned and angled them well, too. :)

I like this poem to a point, Jame. It's sweet and it's simple, but I feel like if you wanted to, you could expand on this to inject some more ...

5. The Westing Game by Ellen Raskin 4. Magic Treehouse by I forget 3. Junie B. Jones by Barbra Park 2. Phantom of the Opera by I forget his name ...

Flemzo, this is an inspiring post. I think I might want to make this resolution one of mine for this year, just because it would be a huge project and ...

;D Yes, nice avatar, my friend. hehehe. Aw, I missed it here. 83

So, I figured since I hope to return to YWS right as soon as I get home [which is in about a week], that I might remind you all what ...

Hello, there. I'm Hannah. ^^ Nice to meet you. I'll try to put this as nicely as I can, but I do believe if that you honestly want to use ...