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Re: I Bet On the Moon
Down for ripping up and rewriting.
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: My Obsession
Hey, Captain.classy. Now, I'm no sonnet-expert or anything, but I have learned a thing or two about rhyming and metered poetry in my attempts at it, and I'm going to ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Happiness
Hey, Nike! So I have a couple of big points that could make this little essay better. First of all, you need to proof-read. That's one of the first rules ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: Dead in the Ocean
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Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: trans-neptunian
I'm here, Kylan! I told you I would be here, and I'm tired of not doing what I say I will do. D: I. First Impressions The overarching thoughts that ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Snomaggeden
:D It's a cardinal, guys. And these pictures are great -- I love the fire hydrants especially because they have great color. You positioned and angled them well, too. :)
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Little Bird
I like this poem to a point, Jame. It's sweet and it's simple, but I feel like if you wanted to, you could expand on this to inject some more ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read
5. The Westing Game by Ellen Raskin 4. Magic Treehouse by I forget 3. Junie B. Jones by Barbra Park 2. Phantom of the Opera by I forget his name ...
Dec 15, 2009 -
Re: 2009: A Year In Poetry
Flemzo, this is an inspiring post. I think I might want to make this resolution one of mine for this year, just because it would be a huge project and ...
Dec 15, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
;D Yes, nice avatar, my friend. hehehe. Aw, I missed it here. 83
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
So, I figured since I hope to return to YWS right as soon as I get home [which is in about a week], that I might remind you all what ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Monster
Hello, there. I'm Hannah. ^^ Nice to meet you. I'll try to put this as nicely as I can, but I do believe if that you honestly want to use ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Remembering Summer
Hello, Miss-Firefly. I would just like to remind you that at YWS we have a 3:1 review to post ratio which means that you should review three works from other ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Happy Camp
I feel like I can't refuse you! Even when I should be working on my paper for Philosophy, I'd rather help you, because if I'm not writing, at least you ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Art
Hey, Gahks. Sorry for the wait! His stubble-less jaw, sharpened as if by a lathe, betrays his innocence. Now, I don't know about you, but for me '-less' and 'as ...
Aug 10, 2009
