Hannah

First of all, if you want to break up, do it. I know it's not place for relationship advice, but if you honestly don't want to be with someone, it ...

Hello! How often have you written poetry? Let's see if we can't get you into a different style. First of all, I'm going to challenge you to write a poetry ...

Hey, I have a few bits to mention on your couplets. :3 1) The sun has risen, it is now dawn, the moon is playing as the morning's pawn. I ...

-is mesmerized by your pretty row of badges- Would you mind helping me try to pinpoint the discomfort everyone feels with the sailor's thoughts in this poem? And anything else ...

Demeter! Thank you so much for the comments on 'He Stood'. I am looking in to why everyone thinks those parts are choppy, and it's also really valuable to me ...

Hi, Blink! Would you mind dropping an opinion on this? :D

Hello, Kamas. You say you're not good at poetry and I think that's a load of feathers! -angry glare- Here's the feeling that I have after reading through this a ...

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Do you live for the summer? I remember some of your summer poetry from last year, Kylan, and you SHINE here. I believe that last year I also cautioned us ...

"The ticking of the clock sounded like dynamite and rumbled through my body with every stroke." "The cars whizzed by me, drag-racing, it seemed, as I walked along the lonely ...

Haha, because as much as people hate to admit it, we form intense connections with one another and can adapt to pain or disappointment as long as it gets us ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS~ Be sure to look around at works from other members and lend them your suggestions, too. Looking through what could be improved in other works helps ...

Hey, Crescent. I really like the idea of this poem because it's not something I see often, so it was rather refreshing. But it was lacking, and I think it ...

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Hi, Yuriko! I have a few quick tips that will help you to organize your poetry! First of all, when you're considering punctuation (unless you're experimenting with it), take out ...