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Hi, Jenni. I like the idea of using the colors in this poem, and I like that you didn't just go with 'omg, red means love now there's red so ...

First of all, I'm sorry for like jumping on all of your submissions. I read your earlier one as well, though I forget if I critiqued it or not. Anyways, ...

Why did you post this? It doesn't say anything about the story, and if it does, we don't know it because it's not connected to anything. Since this is a ...

Technically, I think that you can write thirty days on the last or first day and have it count, but of course for variation, differing inspiration and TIME, it would ...

Hey, Kylan! This is beautiful. It is hard to find phrases that don't sit right, but there are a few that I want to point out to you. rising warm ...

i hear the stiff walls sucking up your voice and turning it into cement. it's gritty, it's hard to listen to you and create something good out of it. maybe ...

Jeez, Nate. It's like I know you in real life, now. Thank you!

This is really pretty nice, and it's pretty well done, as well. I'm not going to go through every little piece because I'm about to get to bed, but here's ...

Hey, man. Well, I didn't really like this. And the problem is that I didn't like it in form or in content, so I'm going to address both of those ...

As long as you get better than last year, I'd say it's a success. For great success, however, try all thirty flavors!

In the requirements for a contest, it says to "submit in duplicate". Does this mean ONLY to avoid submitting an original or does it mean to submit two copies of ...

I attempted it last year; failed on day one. I'll make it to day two this year, I swear! NUH-UH, you can't fail on day one unless you refuse to ...

Who's up for it? Thirty poems in thirty days! I know I am!

Please read the following articles and edit your work accordingly. Though punctuation isn't the deciding factor as to whether a piece is good or not, it makes it a lot ...

I think that it would be cliche if you didn't describe the world after it was destroyed and if that destruction did not affect the main character at all. To ...