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Re: NaPoWriMo 2010
Technically, I think that you can write thirty days on the last or first day and have it count, but of course for variation, differing inspiration and TIME, it would ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: breadbaking
Hey, Kylan! This is beautiful. It is hard to find phrases that don't sit right, but there are a few that I want to point out to you. rising warm ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: YWS's own... THREAD BOX POEM!
i hear the stiff walls sucking up your voice and turning it into cement. it's gritty, it's hard to listen to you and create something good out of it. maybe ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: What does "submit in duplicate" mean?
Jeez, Nate. It's like I know you in real life, now. Thank you!
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Buried Alive
This is really pretty nice, and it's pretty well done, as well. I'm not going to go through every little piece because I'm about to get to bed, but here's ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Eating Worms
Hey, man. Well, I didn't really like this. And the problem is that I didn't like it in form or in content, so I'm going to address both of those ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: NaPoWriMo 2010
As long as you get better than last year, I'd say it's a success. For great success, however, try all thirty flavors!
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: What does "submit in duplicate" mean?
In the requirements for a contest, it says to "submit in duplicate". Does this mean ONLY to avoid submitting an original or does it mean to submit two copies of ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: NaPoWriMo 2010
I attempted it last year; failed on day one. I'll make it to day two this year, I swear! NUH-UH, you can't fail on day one unless you refuse to ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: NaPoWriMo 2010
Who's up for it? Thirty poems in thirty days! I know I am!
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: The Life And Times Of Scarlet Adamson Mer-Witch Princess
Please read the following articles and edit your work accordingly. Though punctuation isn't the deciding factor as to whether a piece is good or not, it makes it a lot ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Is this avoiding Cliches?
I think that it would be cliche if you didn't describe the world after it was destroyed and if that destruction did not affect the main character at all. To ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: The YWLJ 2010 Volume: On Sale Now!
Do they have information about the site on the inside? Would they be useful to purchase and distribute as advertising in this way? I guess I've never seen a literary ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Jumping
Hello, Aristotle! So, this a nice little piece. It's silly, so there's not much to review concerning the message, but I still think you could fix it up a little ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Traveling Soldier Short Write
Hey, Kitkat! First, before you do anything else, click on the dancing pink elephant and learn how to punctuate dialogue. No, seriously. Click on it. :elephant: Secondly, I want to ...
Mar 24, 2010
