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Hi, Jester! I don't know if this a continuation of anything. I don't think it is, but I'm confused and tired. So if it is, excuse my ignorance. Anyways, let's ...

Thumb? Really? It was funny, as I'm sure you knew, and that kind of ruined the whole tone of the poem. If that's what you were going for, a little ...

he is the camera box, though her lense is fragile. but why is he so unbending? is there no give around her curves; why won't he hold her close? why ...

It's also done just to get ahead or prepare yourself for when you don't write your daily poem. Like a buffer. Like in NaNo, people write more than 1667 words ...

Awww, Mr. Whiskers is so adorable! And a Maine Coon, huh? Aren't they the kind of cat that gets really big and hefty and cuddly? My kitty isn't a maine ...

"i found your earrings. look in the bells above the door." i looked up at arcs i'd never seen before and saw them hanging -- they were red and pretty, ...

You should definitely try some poetry! It's a really good thing to learn about the power of words and how to construct sentences. I never really /did/ poetry before I ...

Hi, Caitlyn! Welcome to YWS! What kinds of things do you write and draw? Like, do you write short stories or poems? Do you write romantic fiction or non-fiction or ...

Have you ever read East of Eden by Steinbeck? It has been one of my favorite books, but I kind of don't remember it, so I'm re-reading it. I think ...

Hey, Brooke! What kind of writing do you do? Like, in what genre? Also, I would encourage you, while you're in the midst of so many other writers, their opinions, ...

I take it this is meant to be read aloud? It's a great idea. I don't know if you're familiar with the genre or the idea of slam poetry, because ...

Jenni321 said it all already lol. But you spelled realization wrong. You spelled it r-e-a-l-i-s-a-t-i-o-n Keep in mind, Layla, that different countries have different spellings. That's the British spe

Hi, Jenni. I like the idea of using the colors in this poem, and I like that you didn't just go with 'omg, red means love now there's red so ...

First of all, I'm sorry for like jumping on all of your submissions. I read your earlier one as well, though I forget if I critiqued it or not. Anyways, ...

Why did you post this? It doesn't say anything about the story, and if it does, we don't know it because it's not connected to anything. Since this is a ...