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Kylan, this poem was a mouthful for me. I will have to chew and digest it and come back to it again once it's broken down in my heart, but ...

The Awakening is a good novel. I like this poem and I can see it in my mind and feel her and her tiredness, but there are a few things ...

April 2nd, 2010; There are no bars here She sits in her room and knots her fingers and cracks her knitting, tangled in a blanket she vomited up herself, pouring ...

well this tea is nice but what I really want is some candy from that man dressed up as the easter bunny because he can't show his own face. I ...

Oh god. I think... my reaction would be inappropriate for YWS. Let's just say I've fallen madly in love with you and I'm going to huddle up inside this thread ...

Demeter, I really liked this first poem. The only thing I would want you to do is go through and read it like a sentence, taking out the descriptive phrases ...

Hey, Paladin! Glad to see you joined NaPo. ^___^ I'll get to reviewing your other poem shortly. Anyways, you don't HAVE to choose a title, but a wise YWSian once ...

Comments and suggestions are always welcome! --- April 1st, 2010; Is my purpose enough? Tittering bushes rustle and blend with the dressed petticoats as the maids circle, like vultures with ...

Thanks for the feedback, both of you, but this was written over a year ago! *Locked.*

I'm doing NaPo for sure and I may try Screnzy because I convinced Adam to do it and got some software on the computer for him. If the software is ...

I think I'm going to have all of my poems relate to each other in one way or another. Maybe this would be a great opportunity to write a novel ...

When is it? I wouldn't mind trying my pen at poetry. I've never really been a huge fan but it sounds like it could be fun, plus if all else ...

Aw, you should try writing more now that you're here. I found that when I was surrounded by other poets discovering what made good poetry, it helped me to learn ...

Yes, please resize! Another thing I would suggest is experimenting with different kinds of lighting when you take nature pictures. So, this exact stick might not be there, but try ...

What's the point of having all those lines? I think this might be equally as powerful as a couplet. 'Tick - The fives line up on the face of the ...