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Hi, Rekats! ^_^ I saw that you were very interested in nature and animals. Does that translate into your writing? For example, have you ever considered writing articles about some ...

Well, one way to start getting familiar with the site would be to look in the literary forums , read some work from whichever section you prefer, and offer a ...

Hi, Sealegs! ^_^ I've seen you around so I thought I would stop in to review~ First of all, I like this idea. However, after looking back at the title, ...

Hi, Forest! Remember me? :D It's nice for me to be able to see one of your poems, so hopefully I can help out with some suggestions. First of all, ...

Elinor! This is a really interesting idea and I like it, but I think it would be even cooler if you could somehow write this poem and have the sentences ...

That's a good one as well, Sealegs! Thanks!

I like the idea of being able to disappear into the world, but I think you might have made this more effective if you used more impermanent imagery. Rain is ...

Hi, Mizz. I thought this poem was nice, but I think it might be stronger if you took off the last two lines. It's a nice idea, and the only ...

I wrote a poem on a banana yesterday. I will upload the pictures as soon as I can. April 9th, 2010; sometimes, I wish I had a soul I never ...

Kylan, I did like the oregon trail one! ^_^ Now, there were a few phrases that seemed really off in 'your iron hymn'. like a whore's laughter. iron-hymned iron maidens ...

What I would recommend considering in your next attempt at an image (if you choose to attempt that again), would be to get rid of the story altogether. Try to ...

LOVER. I like this poem because it's about something kind of simple (unless I missed it completely), but it really gives a different tone to it. It's like the narrator ...

April 7th, 2010; On One Thing We Can Subsist Thistle-whisperers are wrapped up tight in robes of periwinkle as their heads are tossed and swayed by grand ideas, ideals, and ...

I keep wondering why my skirts ride up between my legs and why I keep having to pull them down every three steps, because I don't walk around and watch ...

Hey again, Elinor! I liked the idea of this new poem, but the problem was I didn't even understand that it was about a rainy day until the last stanza. ...