Hannah

Hi, Tears! I'm Hannah! Welcome to YWS, and feel free to PM me if you find you have any other questions, but it seems like the answers to the ones ...

Hi, Kylan. judas stars I liked them, they were good and entrancing, but after pulling myself out of the poem, I think you could completely do away with the second ...

April 11th, 2010; in love with a hundred wandering legs and when you pass me and have taken all my clothes, i will stand here still, shivering and waiting for ...

I noticed that the review counts for last month changed around. Is this related at all? Perhaps reviews that were made on chapters that were moved are not counted any ...

Elinor, I don't know if I suggested this to you or not, but I would love it if you could attempt to write a poem that doesn't have a story ...

The last three lines of day nine made me open my eyes in agreement and astonishment that you managed to put together those words in just the right way. They ...

Toy planes buzz against the backdrop of wintry clouds, the mottled fur of the sky. And I shiver in the chill, looking up so high above, at these would-be bombers ...

April 10th, 2010 In Notes of New Grass and Pale Blue Afternoons Walking with kids made me realize in a moment, how imperative it is that we find big rocks ...

Clo, all I can say is that poem was not finished, and I agree that you need to keep going. Especially after reading Corso's "Marriage", I felt that your poem ...

Ooh, I'm going to like being able to find new replies on blogs and such! ^_^

Yeah, haven't stopped by these forums much lately, but I should have, because these newest poems are really nice. I love you. I'm sorry I haven't replied to your PM ...

Hi, Elinor. I guess what I can do right now is heartily second the advice you've already gotten. This poem lacks a certain feeling, and I think some if comes ...

Hi, Rekats! ^_^ I saw that you were very interested in nature and animals. Does that translate into your writing? For example, have you ever considered writing articles about some ...

Well, one way to start getting familiar with the site would be to look in the literary forums , read some work from whichever section you prefer, and offer a ...

Hi, Sealegs! ^_^ I've seen you around so I thought I would stop in to review~ First of all, I like this idea. However, after looking back at the title, ...