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I have a question. If you are a vitamin made out of cake, which vitamin are you? Vitamin C?! Hahahaha, because cake starts with C? Or are you something more ...

Ooh, that's an interesting idea! Yes! Definitely see if it's necessary to the story, and how you can gently let it into the plot. If it doesn't flow or if ...

Not to be rude, but I will not have read any of the previous reviews. xD If I repeat anything that's been said so far, my apologies. I really like ...

This was a very interesting piece and I was drawn in by the story, but there are a few general things I am wondering about. First of all, what is ...

I think the biggest problem with this piece is that it's very shallow. You name off all these events that the characters shared, but you don't describe why these events ...

Hello, Mortimer! With your range of hobbies you shouldn't have any problem coming up with original material for your own stories. A lot of those hobbies are art related, and ...

Yep, Snoink nailed all of them. ^__^ Also, if you happened to send a private message just before you attempted to post, the system counts PMs as a post for ...

Hehe, welcome, Squirrely! I'm glad you have such intelligent friends around you that they would advise you to join YWS! ^_^ So, do you write only short stories? I mean, ...

Hey, I'm new here, too. So far all I have been doing is reviews... I've been kinda nervous about posting any of my work online. :? I hope that every ...

Hey, Hero! I must say I was confused by the title at first, but then I got it and then I thought it was a little too obvious! Try finding ...

I. LOVE. this poem. I love reading it aloud. If you haven't, you should!

From my understanding, lyric poetry is more about sensations of nature, landscapes, general feelings and emotions, while dramatic poetry is about showing one person's point of view. Don't worry about ...

I look forward to seeing somet of our writing and maybe some of your blogs. I see that you've posted one asking a question, but I'd love to see some ...

Hi, Izzy. One thing that I really appreciated about this poem was how you delivered it as if it were straightforward, when it's really not and its purpose is to ...

Bye bye, Nate! Thanks!