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Re: Aristotle's Collection of Couplets and Tongue Twisters
Hey, Aristotle! Now, most of these are a matter of taste. Couplets are often seen as thing that are really insignificant and so they're forgotten in a matter of minutes. ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Lost Time
Hi, baby. Here are some of my thoughts on the matter. Now I'm not saying that poetry is ALL ABOUT the conservation of words, but I think that you can ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Second Chances
Hey, Kaedee. I have one big piece of advice for you and I hope that you take some time to consider it. This problem really hit me when I read ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Heya Everyone!
I have a question. If you are a vitamin made out of cake, which vitamin are you? Vitamin C?! Hahahaha, because cake starts with C? Or are you something more ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: The Woodsmith
Ooh, that's an interesting idea! Yes! Definitely see if it's necessary to the story, and how you can gently let it into the plot. If it doesn't flow or if ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Of Gold, Gleam, Metal; or, a poem containing a play
Not to be rude, but I will not have read any of the previous reviews. xD If I repeat anything that's been said so far, my apologies. I really like ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: The Woodsmith
This was a very interesting piece and I was drawn in by the story, but there are a few general things I am wondering about. First of all, what is ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Best Friends Never BReak Up
I think the biggest problem with this piece is that it's very shallow. You name off all these events that the characters shared, but you don't describe why these events ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: New writer - hence a noob.
Hello, Mortimer! With your range of hobbies you shouldn't have any problem coming up with original material for your own stories. A lot of those hobbies are art related, and ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: First Submission
Yep, Snoink nailed all of them. ^__^ Also, if you happened to send a private message just before you attempted to post, the system counts PMs as a post for ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Hello everyone ;)
Hehe, welcome, Squirrely! I'm glad you have such intelligent friends around you that they would advise you to join YWS! ^_^ So, do you write only short stories? I mean, ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey, I'm new here, too. So far all I have been doing is reviews... I've been kinda nervous about posting any of my work online. :? I hope that every ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: A- B-eautiful O-R-T-I-O-N
Hey, Hero! I must say I was confused by the title at first, but then I got it and then I thought it was a little too obvious! Try finding ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: The bells. By Poe.
I. LOVE. this poem. I love reading it aloud. If you haven't, you should!
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Dramatic vs. Lyric
From my understanding, lyric poetry is more about sensations of nature, landscapes, general feelings and emotions, while dramatic poetry is about showing one person's point of view. Don't worry about ...
Apr 23, 2010
