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The problem with these lyrics is that they don't really say anything. If you read it, it's just really vague and it's like 'oh, the same old thing over and ...

Hey, LPR! This is a great idea, first of all, to write about someone who was affected without writing about the people that died or how they felt, someone who ...

Hello! I think this a really nice start to a piece because you could bring so much fear and emotion into it. To really make it rise to its full ...

Hello, Writer! ^_^ It's nice to see a post in scripts, and just from the introduction and list of characters, I can tell this might be a refreshing dip into ...

I really like the balance in a lot of these, especially the lines in the architectural pictures. The first complaint that I found was in 'Wild and Free' -- it ...

So, this is not done. I completely understand that under the time constraint, you didn't have much time to put together a satisfactory ending, but if I don't see a ...

Evi, having read a large bit of this before, I just want to say for you to take any comments about pacing with a grain of salt since this is ...

So what does it show up as when you like something on Facebook, exactly? Does it say 'Name has liked the story "title" on YWS?' I understand that it's not ...

I'm working on revisions, but it would be helpful if you would remember that though I have to split this story into two parts for easy YWS reading, the meaning ...

SACHI, PLEASE?! Her Last Drink Is Coffee !? That is the first part, and the second part is in 'related links'!! Please!? I love you.

Hi, Areida! I would love it if you could pick apart Her Last Drink Is Coffee for me. It's two parts, so follow the link under 'possible related topics' for ...

This is me and Orwell!

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