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April 2: distractions a. This should be prose instead. This should be set apart with commas. This should be torn and twisted until your skin is dry like crumpled paper ...

April 2: distractions April 2: who de man who de man who de man who April 2: I am Confused Between the Sciences April 2: Neighbors and Flight April 3: ...

EVERYONE BACK OFF. -nuzzles up in Helppants's poems-

HELPPANTS. I saw this tree covered with ice bending from the pressure, bending, bending, bowed, and then! Released. But I felt like I skipped over these lines: to the fall ...

Plastic wrapped around your delicate fingertips reminds me of ash.

I really like the rhymes that you have going some of them are just a little off kilter, which gives this collection (though unrelated), a lilting feel. I especially like ...

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I am SO excited. This will be my first real chance to submit! :D

Okay, so I went there and it said 2pm, but I looked later and it said 3pm. Haha. I'm afraid. I don't know if I just read it wrong the ...

Well it LOOKS pretty in the attachment. I don't know, my friend. It doesn't speak. It tells me a lot of things and at the end it reverts to cheap ...

Hi, allicat! I bet you're going to have a great time here. It's a good place to improve your writing, especially if you actively participate in reviewing works by other ...

Hi, Jenny! Welcome to YWS. I'm glad that your mom convinced you to share your work. It's going to be a really enriching process and I am very sure that ...

Hey, Flumicakes. This was a nice piece, but not very memorable. It seemed to arrive and pass without leaving a mark, but I feel like it reached out at the ...

Hello! Thank you for posting these pictures. I'm going to make recommendations, but I have no technical knowledge, so you may have to fix some things on your own or ...