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Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 2: I am Confused Between the Sciences Someday when I am forgotten, I hope that you will kneel in the dirt so that your knees part the topsoil and ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Epic winning.
Why do you hate it? I love your solid rhythm. It's refreshing to have a rhythm to sink in to and hold on to. And then to be blown away ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 2: who de man who de man who de man who I sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk where the crows jump from rocking chair ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Bee-Loud Glade by Steve Himmer
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Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 2: distractions a. This should be prose instead. This should be set apart with commas. This should be torn and twisted until your skin is dry like crumpled paper ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 2: distractions April 2: who de man who de man who de man who April 2: I am Confused Between the Sciences April 2: Neighbors and Flight April 3: ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: This Is Incredibly Silly
EVERYONE BACK OFF. -nuzzles up in Helppants's poems-
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: rise over run
HELPPANTS. I saw this tree covered with ice bending from the pressure, bending, bending, bowed, and then! Released. But I felt like I skipped over these lines: to the fall ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
Plastic wrapped around your delicate fingertips reminds me of ash.
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Refining Fire: 10 short unrelated bits
I really like the rhymes that you have going some of them are just a little off kilter, which gives this collection (though unrelated), a lilting feel. I especially like ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: She Lost an Ear
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Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011
I am SO excited. This will be my first real chance to submit! :D
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: YWS 6th Birthday Radio Show
Okay, so I went there and it said 2pm, but I looked later and it said 3pm. Haha. I'm afraid. I don't know if I just read it wrong the ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: demons (prose poem)
Well it LOOKS pretty in the attachment. I don't know, my friend. It doesn't speak. It tells me a lot of things and at the end it reverts to cheap ...
Oct 23, 2010 -
Re: Hello to Everyone!
Hi, allicat! I bet you're going to have a great time here. It's a good place to improve your writing, especially if you actively participate in reviewing works by other ...
Oct 13, 2010