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Re: drunk with the great starry void -- jack's napowrimo thread
rotting railroads I never knew that this could be so full of imagery. Two words bring me down a very long train track and the rails can be between anything, ...
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Re: Solstice
Hello, hello! Here and hoping to help. On first read through: The movement is impenetrable in its regularity, yet it is not stiff. Nothing so natural could be stiff. Just ...
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Re: Hold the line, another call is coming
So, I'm not going to reference the poem you're responding to in my critique, just because I don't feel I'm educated enough to at this point, and also because I ...
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Re: Scramblings and Ramblings
I'll blink out the memories in Morse code, and maybe some sailor will find me to translate. I really like this, but it can't breathe without the rest of the ...
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Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 3: We pretend to sit side by side I twisted a piece of your hair into mine and left it there until the moon rose and you ripped mine ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 3: Red for Mars You used to be only seventeen and now you are nineteen and okay, listen, this is really important to me: even though we never talk ...
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Re: biros in a half-shell
it's on mornings like this – when the sky spreads above us like surpriseless Moomin jam, highly unlikely to ever be perforated – when I wish I had a lance ...
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Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 3: An Argument after Death I remember that last time I spoke to you, we spoke about summer. You coughed up a little pollen. I brushed my hand over ...
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Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 3: conquest From the ground I call them mountains. They seem to swim in the air and to graze the bottom of the sky, leaving white scratches that spread ...
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Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 3: A Chapter on Attraction Illustration goes like this: a jasmine bell looks whiter surrounded by dead fall bushes. a woman looks uglier next to a child. Now step ...
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Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 3: Only the Rats and Me I keep my ears in a box made of glass but the rats have grown stronger and are gnawing at the corners. Their ...
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Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 2: Neighbors and Flight There is a woman who lives the floor above me who says that she wishes she would cut off her fat and hide it underneath ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 2: I am Confused Between the Sciences Someday when I am forgotten, I hope that you will kneel in the dirt so that your knees part the topsoil and ...
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Re: Epic winning.
Why do you hate it? I love your solid rhythm. It's refreshing to have a rhythm to sink in to and hold on to. And then to be blown away ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 2: who de man who de man who de man who I sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk where the crows jump from rocking chair ...
Apr 3, 2011