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Re: Past Remembrances
WAS THAT PART OF YOUR POEM!? 8D
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 5: tri-hi-puh-huh-leh-het i sit in my under- wear and he sits in his. staring at the same wall melting movement to shape: a dash of apricot, the twitch of ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Dear friends of this academy,
I'd like to hear that poem without the mixing of the two stories. It seems like it's about two different things. I'm more interested in the "sort of pride that ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Juju's new attempt at poetry
Did you leave off the last "d" on purpose? It is kind of amazing without it. Like it was interrupted and shattered. Soooo... Welcome to NaPo! 8D
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
2. There was a girl, like a fairy, some dust-winged other, stood between the worlds, ankle deep in a language of lurid moans, before there were words, cages, before choosing. ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: This Is Incredibly Silly
In the sink physics became a private thing. Yes, please. I love you. I miss you. MORE MORE MORE.
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 5: alveoli a branch sticks up from the ground and cries from its torn end to the sky in tones of green, spring yellow stained again with green. it ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 5: dreaming of Jesus I remember then that God is locked in the freezer and I contemplate the day's many warmths. morning, day, evening, night -- before the icicles ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 5: easybake ginger crumble falls apart in my hands with the feel of butter too warm to cut and sugar too sweet to taste, eclipsing my hands as i ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Jasmine's Attempts to Coax Poetry Back to Her
Morning, mourning, all the same. I've lost my tongue to this refrain. Yes? Yes? More of this? This is delicious right here.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 5: lost at shore The girl stores almonds in her eye sockets, shoving them in with her thumb so they pile up into her head as she sits beneath ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
April 4: Heredity It was weird to find out that the pots my mother gave me when I moved out of her house and out of the state and shoved ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: not even the rain
Wow. Elaboration: I really love this. At first I was like 'Why is he going outside now? that's so weird. I didn't know that would be in the poem", but ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: striking too short at Greeks
morning is the sweetest time of year. Absolutely. I loved the first half of this poem a lot. Well, mostly the part about the mist and the mountains, 'cause it ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: I might be wrong: Kylan's NaPo
Kylan, I love this: we killed the first rabbit yesterday grandpa broke its neck like opening a cold soda I want this to be all the poem is about, though. ...
Apr 5, 2011