Hands05

What a great story, I actually was looking for another one of your works but I found this instead . It was very sad how the child has a rough ...

Well again you gave us all a great piece that I enjoyed reading. I am more of an amateur writer but I know what good is. There weren't many errors ...

Another great chapter, things are really getting intense!(And you also helped me out in Mitadake High on BYOND by letting me know how to get to the security room) I'm ...

Great chapter! Just two grammar errors. I awoke in the hallway. I was sitting towards the wall and Suki, well, Suki was standing in front of me, with an ax ...

What a great chapter! I enjoyed it alot! :D I couldn't find any problems (I never do) you also cut down on the interruptions but there was something that was ...

Great story (chapter). I am a big fan of Mitadake High on BYOND and It got me thinking of writing a story Death Note, but back to the story. It ...

Great job! Two thumbs up. I only could read the revised version because I recently joined but from previous reviews the revision was great. I love how realistic the reactions ...

Hello there!! Welcome to YWS!! First of all, please read the rules and the FAQs before anything else. And I could see, you already have broken a rule. There is ...

Nice to met all of you, I'm Handell but I prefer to be called Hands05 or just Hands for short. :) I never was able to put my ideas into ...

Hello everyone, I'm a new member to YWS and I hope to have a fun time in this forum and I hope to meet many nice, devoted writers. I'm also ...