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Re: My Shadow Has Been Learning My Handwriting
This poem is actually beautiful! I really loved the lines: Dear diary, it began, in my handwriting, though I keep no diary that anyone else could find. It knew things ...
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Re: primordial origin of all creation
Hi! Immediately off the bat, the thing that caught me about your poem was the structure of the text slowly leaning from left to right. Also, the white text combined ...
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Re: My Chelsea
Wow, this is an amazing poem! I absolutely love the line: her eggshell eyes ungleaming in the moonlight her deckled edges flipping sharply in the breeze her scarlet blush the ...
Sep 24
