Hallie

Hey, thanks to everyone for reviewing. It really means a lot to hear what other writer's think of my work. I know there are a couple of mistakes, such as ...

I have trouble starting a piece. I can come up with a million ideas for stories, poems, anything but just can't seem to find the words to set it off. ...

I don't necessarily see my writing as a profession, if it was I would probably take it more seriously. I mostly look at writing as an expression. I've been writing ...

I agree with the others. Simple, beautiful yet dark and deep, so naturally I was gutted when I realised that it was only a few lines shorter. Other than that ...

I don't usually enjoy rhyming poetry, sometimes I find it gets a little too childlike. But that's just my opinion and to be honest, it works in your poem. I ...

Imagery is beautiful, rhythm really works (although I think you may have lost it in the last couple of stanzas) and all in all a lovely piece to read. I ...

I agree with most of the others, while I liked this poem, I didn't like it at the same time. It does flow smoothly and has a vivid attention to ...

Love the imagery, love the story and love the entire piece. I had to read it a couple of times, just to make sure I didn't miss anything out. I'm ...

As others have said, there were other ways you could have written this. On the other hand, I think the way in which you have written it is supreme and ...

The Mirror So you're staring at the frame again, memorising the way you used to smile and laugh, because, lately, they seem to have gone. "What changed?" "What made the ...