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np and ty again

Hey, Nariel This is the first thing i have read by you since i added you as my friend but I really liked it its like kinda like a good ...

that better nariel? i added the apostrophe TY for helping and ty for reviews everyone

LOL i thinks that really funny but i don't know if it fits in dramatic poetry... anyways i think the part about being japanese was funny kinda like wait i ...

that any better? =/ Sorry i was like getting all emotional writing this but thanks for the critiques and i get the whole part about being sarcastic my friend said ...

It Brings me to Tears, It's building up inside me, I cant hold it back. How can I stop these tears, That you brought to me? I lay before your ...

Only your smile can brighten my day. I liked that part it shows lots of emotion and stuff i think this poem is one of my Favz so far on ...

I like it and how you describe the whole feeling of like it feeling like a spider and stuff i thought that was interesting I think the ending is fine ...

i liked it your really were able to capture the whole emotion of sadness vibe with you saying the stuff about the kittens. I liked it and i think im ...

That better? sorry i was kinda emotional right there X3 i just lost my grandpa to alcohol so.... EDIT: and to Nutty thanks and i had my parents read it ...

I just use writing as a way to vent my feelings and i just found this site through a friend and i thought it would be a good way to ...

I LOVE IT im not into the whole dramatic lyrics thing because i like rock and metal (go SlipKnot) but overall i liked it. =D I like how you where ...

I watched him as his world of booze drowned him away, I watched the only way he helped his pain. Bottle after bottle, night after night I’m still wondering how ...