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Very nice start the way you are describing his situation/feelings is very good. Also the way his mother talked, beyond the actual thing of her stay stuff like aye, i ...

Firstly, you are a good writer, KEEP IT UP! I can tell your into a lot of young adult books as that is the way you write. Which isn't a ...

Firstly I love war stories/films. I am not a big grammar nerd this the main thing I spotted. The relentless woodlands of Northern Vietnam were almost too much to bear ...

Quite an interesting concept. I have often toyed around with the idea of another race of human-like beings inhabiting the earth that existed a bit longer than the neanderthals did. ...