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Thanks a million Ally! I'm glad you're telling me what works and what doesn't, so I can keep doing the good, and improving the bad. If I can return that ...

Thanks so much, Taylor! :D I appreciate all the kind words and little nitpicks, haha. Every bit of feedback helps! Ill definitely let you know when I post the next ...

Thanks so much for the kind words! I really appreciate feedback, and I definitely will continue to refine the description. If you haven't yet read the prologue of this novel, ...

It's all good! (: Message received, everything you're trying to communicate effectively reaches me. And thank you for not bashing my points and immediately going on the defensive as I ...

crafty - Once again, it is a nostalgic prologue, so he's not as emotionally involved as he would be in real-time. Maybe it's not as clear that this is a ...

Thank you Rachel! :D I'm glad you enjoyed. If there's anything I can review for you, don't hesitate to ask! - SOCKS

The characters in the prologue become more developed as the story goes on, so they will become more developed. And the dialogue is supposed to be a little formal, since ...

Ally - I'm glad you found some redeeming qualities in this chapter, haha! I'm glad I managed to make someone laugh with my lame "not that into you" joke :D ...

Lupis - I greatly appreciate your review, and I am constantly looking this over and fine-tuning it. I would like to address the point you've made about length though. First ...

Haha, thank you again bubbles! And just for the record, if something is owned by more than one person, I believe it's the "s" then apostrophe. Ex: the boy's room ...

Thanks Walrus! Your kind words are appreciated :D I can't wait for the next chapter of Speed of Light so I can review it! - SOCKS

The prologue is supposed to be a little vague, because it's just a peek into the world. but everything becomes clear over the course of the first couple chapters. I'll ...

Wolf- Thank you again for your helpful review! I actually spent time going over this before I posted it, thinking of your review of Trouble on the Homefront (guess I ...

Thank you very much for your kind words! It's always nice to have good readers :) If you ever need a review, don't hesitate to contact me! - SOCKS

Wolf - The tone isn't too emotional, because it's meant to be nostalgic. The narrator is remembering something, but I see what you mean, maybe I should add some more ...