HIGHWHITESOCKS

Thank you for taking the time to visit this piece here, I'm glad if it brought you some enjoyment! I've taken several classes on writing, and I've been work-shopping with ...

The use of 'prologue was more a notation thing than anything else, it doesn't have to be called that if it violates some (unofficial) rule. The use of ellipses here ...

I know what you mean, and it's mostly intentional that I don't give a lot of explicit detail on faces and expressions and such. I like to leave room for ...

Thanks Holly! As always, very much appreciate the kind words. There is a rhyme and reason to what Bruce and Virgil are doing, haha, and it will all become clear ...

Thank you for your kind words Buggie! I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far. I realize the length is somewhat unwieldy for the first installment especially, but it just ...

Thank you for your review, I do appreciate it! There is an installment that precedes this one, and it is somewhat important to understanding the situation described in this one, ...

This is actually a revamping of a work I conceived years ago, haha. Same story, but the prologue has been entirely reworked, and all the backstories and worldbuilding have been ...

I'm a much better planner than I am writer, haha. Hopefully this will all pan out the way I want it to!

Haha, thanks so much for all your kind words! To answer your question, no Harmony doesn't have a stutter, he stammers when he's nervous, which is part of the situation. ...

Thanks for your kind words! I do appreciate the input. Yes, the conveniences are more than just conveniences, that's all I'll say for now, haha, but it is part of ...

It's definitely getting better, that I can see. But I think the one thing you're really missing is a description of what things they do in Imagine. Like, maybe tell ...

^^^ Thanks for the kind words! Spook: Nope, I called exactly the right person talented :D haha

Now that's more like it! See, we can all be buddies and get along peacefully :D SOCKS to the rescue, haha.

Thanks for the feedback Ego! I'm glad I got those hiccups in my story worked out, and I hope it's a little stronger now than it was. Appreciate the read ...

I understand, I'm not offended, and I understand. I really like this story! :D