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  • Poetry » Realistic, Health
    Re: Warning: don't take the trip

    Hello fellow sock! I'm here to offer my review, haha. You've packed quite a bit into this rather brief poem. I especially like the title, with it's double meaning there ...

    Dec 31, 2014

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Imaginary: Part 1

    (spams "Like" button 8 million times) OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:) Is it possible to make twelve more accounts so that I can like this story more? Seriously, this should be f

    Jun 21, 2011

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: Always There

    Awwww! This is a really sweet and charming story! Let me do my best to review it... The first time I saw him was last year. I was a Freshman ...

    Jun 21, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    Re: Voiceless

    I like it overall, it seems like a very interesting story, and the title is top-notch! :D I wouldn't mind at all reading more, but just a few helpful hints ...

    Jun 16, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: vengeance (chapter ten)

    What an awfully Fallout-esquire story development! Solomon Graves, what a prophetic name! I kinda wish you'd used it for a more main-story character, but hey, you's the author! Anyway, to ...

    May 17, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Dylan, I Hardly Knew Ya

    I was feeling tired today after an exhausting week, and I wasn't going to review anything today. Then I read this story, and I was already thinking about all the ...

    May 14, 2011

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Inside Jokes

    Well this poem is pretty stylin'! I love the line structure, it's as creative as the idea. And the examples of things that you'd say that are inside jokes really ...

    May 8, 2011

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Math Class Dreams

    Grrr, I can't stand those arrogant juniors! Anyway, I really like this poem! It's cute and sweet, and the rhymes are fun and catchy. I'm envisioning someone scribbling this down ...

    May 8, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Teenage Bruises

    You know, I'm tired today, and I wasn't going to review this (insensitive I know, but I had the thought). Then I read the last paragraph, my mouth dropped open, ...

    May 8, 2011

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: A Chance At Good-Bye (Part 1)

    This is a really fun and fantastic story opening to a story you have here! I enjoyed reading it quite a lot :D It's fun, lighthearted, and really easy to ...

    May 8, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Boy Who

    Let me begin by saying I love the avatar! Haha, Kingdom Hearts is a fantastic franchise. Now for the poem... I really like it overall. It's very sweet and emotional, ...

    May 7, 2011

  • Hmm, another very interesting take on a popular story! Just a couple of notes though: - So Christ had a wife, haha. I believe it! I'm sure he endorsed love ...

    May 7, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: vengeance (chapter nine)

    You know what, I was wrong, THIS is your best chapter so far! Let's see why.... I woke up the next day sore and in tears. The bittersweet taste of ...

    May 7, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: vengeance (chapter eight)

    This is promising! :D I liked this chapter the best out of any of them, I think. Gettin' into it! The door opened reluctantly with a loud creaking sound, as ...

    May 7, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: vengeance (chapter seven)

    Again, getting right into it. As we made our way to the centre of the forest, the attacks became more frequent. Wave after wave of blue tribals flung themselves without ...

    May 7, 2011

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