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Re: Torture Chamber
Chills when reading this! Spine-tingling chills! I really love the images here, and you did a great job creating an environment. I really was able to visualize everything easily, and ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
If this poem were ever printed on a greeting card, it would increase the national amount of paper used by a hundredfold! This is a fantastic and hilarious look at ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: The Wood's five senses
Let me say, I think this is a really creative idea here. The whole poem is personifying the woods with five senses like people have. And you've depicted all the ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: You're No Different
I really like the message this poem is communicating. Two people, vastly different, always taking pot shots at each other (at least I hope I got that right!). I'm familiar ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: [deleted]
I looooooooooooooove this poem so much! It's making my heart warm up with joy! :D Now let me pause a moment to shout enthusiastically before I get to details. (HOORAY ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
GENIUS GENIUS GENIUS! I could not praise this poem enough for it's creative and true words! Let me see.... Broken, Shattered, In a swift steady motion. A wretched mess. You ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Compliments
Love love LOVE the mood of this poem! :D I can totally sympathize with the narrator here; always wanting people to compliment you so that you feel better. I've found ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Black Rabbit I
Ooooh, chills from reading this! I really really like this beginning! It sets a very somber, yet mysterious tone for the story. I especially like Aria's interaction with the young ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance (chapter two)
Alright, reading chapter two made me even more excited for this story. Now for the concrete feedback: For the first time since my home was destroyed, I thought about Dean's ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance (chapter one)
Well I finally got around to reading this, and I am glad I did! Where do i begin... The first paragraph is good. It almost seems cliched, but theres a ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Marko: (chops down the trees so he is now no longer lost) Joseph: (calls for help over his radio, then sets up a signal beacon) Stephanie: (immediately looks for any ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
6.872 x 10 to the 50th power/10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING! I wish I'd thought of it first! haha
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
15/10! Amazingly amazing! :smt003
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
Ohhhhhhh! I see
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
I don't speak German, but I like cupcakes! 9/10
Feb 4, 2011