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Okay, hmm.. I'll be honest. I'm not sure if I understand what you're saying, but I think I like it. :D Maybe you should try to describe your feeling a ...

Hi! This poem of yours is lovely and I've enjoyed it very much. Well done, easy meaning yet could be deep, has been put into words with great rhyming. Your ...

Hi there! Is this just chapter one? It's so so interesting. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. Please continue writing. :) I love the plot of the story, ...

Notes spilled softly from your guitar as we sat by the fireplace. The occasional pop of slowly burning wood added to the romance of the music. I recognized the song ...

Hi there! I've got to say I loved it. The flow was so good and the meaning was easy to understand. I loved the rhyming too. Honestly, I think it ...

Wow! :D It's really good. I agree with what you say. Love usually brings pain and at the end you take another look and say: "Man!I was stupid.Where's the gain?!" ...

Hi there! I think it's a nice poem,sort of funny too. :D But his heart strings sing A lovely song he calls Rose. I like this part a lot. :) ...

Hi! I'm not sure what to say.The poem seems great, but a million thoughts came upon me. I'm not sure what you my opinion, the poem needs a bit of ...

Hi! This chapter is so so so cool. :D:D I love the action and I think you did a great job at letting us-readers-imagine it. :) I honestly love it ...

Hi there! :) I love the poem, it's really good and well, full of pain. Back to your hurt shouts, I didn't really understand this line, if you don't mind ...

Wow!I love this! It feels as if it's about me.:D I've always thought like that:) I think it's an awesome poem. Good luck with the rest and keep up the ...

I think this is a very strong poem - more than your others. I think what you wrote about Kashmir made me feel the poem much more and it also ...

Yup, I agree with Juniper. I kinda got lost in the middle and at the end I felt like rereading it as if I missed something. Please make it more ...

It's amazing how from all the poems I've read yours were the best. I guess those who trust GOD and thank him day after day are the ones who feel ...

Your ideas are brilliant and your rhyming is very good, but you really need to fix how the poem looks. It does bother many readers. I believe if you do ...