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Re: Will Review
Dumping two more on you, sorry. :( Contest is over, but still... Hope ya don't mind. Don't Think Twice, Part Four Don't Think Twice, Part Five
Aug 22, 2008 -
Re: Shell of a City
Prypiat, Ukraine, 1993 It was a shell of a city. Newspapers still sat on racks outside the train station, ghost cries of the newspaper boy trying to sell his load ...
Aug 22, 2008 -
Re: Don't Think Twice, Part Five
Word:Picture 017 : 05 There had been so much blood. All over his clothes, all over the walls, all over her. The floor had been streaked with blood. The bedsheets ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: Don't Think Twice, Part Four
A/N - This set of short stories is close to an end, it seems. I promise the few who read this that the next part will explain exactly what all ...
Aug 20, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Old Scores. Very poorly written, and compared to the likes of Dave Pelzer's A Child Called It. I'm not one to talk, but the dialogue was horrendously fake. Also, The ...
Aug 20, 2008 -
Re: Will Review
I'm really sorry; I forgot to check back on this thing. I'll get right on it. :) Thank you very much, I appreciated the reviews and am edited it up ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Will Review
Well, I have yet to receive any reviews on the following: Don't Think Twice, Part Three Don't Think Twice, Part Two Don't Think Twice, Part Three I'm not completely happy ...
Aug 15, 2008 -
Re: Exam Results
I didn't get any results, obviously, since I'm not doing exams until next year - but my sister got AAC. A in English Lit&Lang Combines, A in Sociology and C ...
Aug 15, 2008 -
Re: Bones
Nitpicks: repulsion and attraction Repulsion from what? Attraction from what? It is not made clear enough early enough for this sentence to make sense. the tree branches Nitpicking, but what ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Don't Think Twice, Part Three
Word:Picture 011 : 05 Fingers A red dress had hugged her figure, flourishes of embroidery scattered across the silk. She had held two white lilies in her hands, their delicate ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: 9,000 words
Probably a long short story. Waaay too short for a novella. Even 50,000 is considered a novella.
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Where do you write?
I write at my computer. When my laptop is fixed - anywhere I feel like, really. Cannot and will not write by hand unless desperate times call for desperate measure. ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: do you have bad writing?
My teachers love me for mine, too, Saint. :P Mine is awful!
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Any of you have manga books?
I haven't got much. - Love Hina - Saiyuki - DNAngel - Mail Order Ninja (won in a raffle. Aghh.) - World of Warcraft That's about it, I think. I've ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: The Expert List
The other expert list looks like it's for elements of fiction rather than here, which is for the specific subjects on things unrelated to fiction, but are good for background ...
Aug 14, 2008
