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Re: Trapped
Yes, really, welcome to yws! This has a great flow to it, which I really look for in poetry. I think though that you should put a new twist on ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Luna 6.2
I like this, because it makes you wonder what it's like for people who all of a sudden get a huge change in their lives, emotionally, physically, or both. Sorry ...
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: Find Me-January 1, 2016
Wow, that's really sad, but it was also really interesting to see a different perspective of a suicidal girl. I'd like to see a small transition through her diary of ...
Jun 5, 2010
