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Re: Blackmail
Mannerisms of the Dog. It seems rather unlikely a dog would not react at all to a stranger being in the house. Strangers give of a scent that is foreign ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: Clinging Onto Perfection
Conceptual Review An enjoyable narrative. A caution, however, on reliance to pronouns. Though the script does not necessarily require names, the amount in use currently detracts from the overall feel ...
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 2
Conceptual Review Quite the intriguing addition. It is certainly dismaying to witness how little attention this installment receives for it is simply gorgeous. A comment on the French and Latin ...
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: Potential prologue
Usage of " clockmaker " is acceptable. striĀ·ate : to mark with fine grooves; showing narrow structural bands or lines; as, " a striated crystal "; " striated muscular fiber ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 1
Kisonakl; I place this story's beginning between 2100 and 2150; in a century, English is obsolete? The catalyst causing such a change must rival the size of Manhattan Island. I ...
Aug 8, 2008
