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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Blackmail

    Mannerisms of the Dog. It seems rather unlikely a dog would not react at all to a stranger being in the house. Strangers give of a scent that is foreign ...

    Aug 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Clinging Onto Perfection

    Conceptual Review An enjoyable narrative. A caution, however, on reliance to pronouns. Though the script does not necessarily require names, the amount in use currently detracts from the overall feel ...

    Oct 12, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 2

    Conceptual Review Quite the intriguing addition. It is certainly dismaying to witness how little attention this installment receives for it is simply gorgeous. A comment on the French and Latin ...

    Oct 12, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Potential prologue

    Usage of " clockmaker " is acceptable. striĀ·ate : to mark with fine grooves; showing narrow structural bands or lines; as, " a striated crystal "; " striated muscular fiber ...

    Oct 11, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 1

    Kisonakl; I place this story's beginning between 2100 and 2150; in a century, English is obsolete? The catalyst causing such a change must rival the size of Manhattan Island. I ...

    Aug 8, 2008


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