Gwenevire

Okay! :D I think I might have done that once when I first joined :P I will make sure it never happens again! Thanks for letting us know.

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Okay... But are my comments helping at all?

Okay. That's clears things up! Thanks :D

No problem I enjoy reading this! :D

The morning sun shone through a small frosted window. It cast a perfect rectangle on a small twin sized bed. On this bed under a pile of sheets and blankets ...

Small bits of families and homes slipped out of the panthers mind but where soon replaced by hatred. Saffron smiled before letting the poor creature loose. She turned into the ...

Well... Its good. Maybe you should not call them by the name Noble until Raven says Nobles. Right... Because Ruki does not know what they are (Right?) You should make ...

I think you need to describe the surroundings a little more. Not just the people but the trees the buildings etc. They are walking... Where what does it look like. ...

First of all I think you need to make it more obvious that there is a man in her house not a wolf... You don't really say "ah there is ...

Oh yes one last thing... Maybe you should explain how she thinks about dragons a little more... Like does she believe in them or not etc. SeraphTree Other than that... ...

Well... I can tell that you rushed that. You have to take more time. You need to jazz it up a bit. Its a really bland now. Maybe she could ...

Is that a story? I am sorry... But... Let me help you! First capatalise all you I's. For example! You Wrote: Dragons, although scaly and scary, they are still my ...

The dragons won?! YAY! Go dragons! w00t!

Hello there Helen! I am Genevieve. So... what's the name of your story?