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Re: City of Ashes
I love it! I think you should try to read it out laud to yourself and maybe you could smooth out some of the bumps. I think its very interesting. ...
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: My English project--Akeelah and the Bee
It nice. But as you said it has limited description. Witch is nice. But I think it could do with some more :D
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Ayra's attempt at poetry- Nameless
Very nice work! I really like it!
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Starlit (Fantasy)
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Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Narf!
Haha! We should not be chatting on this so... Lets each-other PM each other or GB each-other XD
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: A wolf and his girl chapter 4
Really? Aw that makes me feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside! Thank you :D I really like where you are going with the story. I look forwards to ...
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Narf!
Hey! it was fun! We should put them in our Diary book thinger! You can call me Vivi or Ning whatev' I don' care!
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Moonlight Sea Gull: Chapter 3
I am not done yet! :( So don't crit till I give you the heads up! Try my other 2 chapters! :D
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Narf!
We hit the floor many times XD There where many "Ouches" and "Ekks" You should try it!
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: .:The Wind:.
Thanks.
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Moonlight Sea Gull: Chapter 3
It was a school day once more and the hustle and bustle of teens and pre-teens filled the streets. Some sat on cement ledges talking while others wrestled or threw ...
Nov 30, 2007 -
Re: The Prophecy of Dark Circle
Grate work! I really like that type of poetry... It flows well! -Cheers! Genevieve xxx
Nov 30, 2007 -
Re: Bunnies!
Very nice. They remind me of those films with the single voice. The Narrator and then all the little pictures of cute things... Yah XD I think the second one ...
Nov 30, 2007 -
Re: Love
Nice work!
Nov 30, 2007 -
Re: They didn't know
Wow. Very nice work! I think I know exactly how you feel :D -Keep writing Genevieve xxx
Nov 30, 2007