Gwenevire

5/10 Don't get it... Via said Um, well...personally I don't think being immature for your entire life is a good thing? To clarify your comment Via. I did not say ...

4/10 I don't get it?

Well you need to work on capitalization... It good but we know nothing about who looks like what and where this person is and what he thinks... This is a ...

Well you should add a few more lines of description to it and maybe make it a little easier to read. Its hard to feel for either of the characters. ...

Thats really nice. I am assuming you like someone. Eh... Well I went through this too. Nice... I know what you mean. Good work Genevieve xxx

4/10 The capital letters and the extra two exclamation marks cause me physical pain to look at. I like the word though. :wink:

7/10 I don't really get it but at the same time I like it :D

First Entry Maybe you could tell us a little more about Charlie... In the rape scene you kept on saying it went to fast etc. Maybe you should say other ...

I agree with Ayra... We aren't all 18. Please rate that. I will consider reading it and giving you a review tomorrow.

(Nothing much has happened you can just read the last page...)

Thanks Suzanne. I don't think I will make this a story. Maybe I could turn it into poetry or something. Thanks for the info :D I will read it as ...

Thanks I will change that later I am kinda tired right now. And nope there where only skeletons. What els am I supposed to make death look like?

In music we listen to this odd song named Danse Macabre by Camille Saint-Saens. It inspired me to right this story. ---------------------------------> Once a year at the strike of midnight ...

Again... You need to put more description into it. This is way to short to be a chapter... Try to make them longer! Remember to capitalize your I's and some ...

Yay! I am on my way to a blue star! w00t!