Gwenevire

Username: 79% I seem to hear it allot. Overused I guess. Custom Titles: 54% I am not very pleased how you didn't use any capitals and it makes absolutely no ...

7/10 I like it but its a bit to flashy and pink for me. I like that there is punk in this but the tutu and the pink no... I ...

Thanks! :D I get what you mean about run on. I felt that when I was righting it. But I guess I could add a few commas or periods in ...

I think her bleak sort of un-amused face is evil enough for her :D Thanks for your help! :D

Thank you for the help :D I will be sure to do that! Thanks

The frosty night air was laden with the metallic scent of spilt blood. Sudden screams and shrieks of pain split the silence, sending shivers of anger down the spine of ...

Nice work. But its a bit to descriptive and I noticed that you described the same things more than once. Remember Wisdom begins in wonder Please post your revised one ...

10/10 I like it allot! :D Sorry about my avatar I am looking for a new one.

Its supposed to be wacky and out of proportion and stuff. Its abstract!

She is supposed to be wacky and out of proportion. Its abstract!

7/10 I like it! Its interesting but I think it either need more colour or no colour.

2/10 Well first off she is wearing really slutty clothes. Second off she is dancing like a striper and third off she isn't even facing you! Grr... I don't like ...