Gwenevire

Its nice but not very well dun. Maybe some more description would do. Its icky! Good work! :D

Thank you! :D I will be sure to do that!

No silly its a letter to my cuisine Ayra. (Camille) But nice idea with the story I might consider doing that through like a letter thing! Thanks :D

I love this! Its so funny! It has inspired me to write something! :D I lobe how Random Guy 2 keeps on coming back to life! Keep writing!

That was a lovely little piece. I love it XD Its just so smooth and short. It makes so much sense and you are a great writer! Keep going! Genevieve ...

Camille. I don't know what I would do without you. Probably nothing at all. I would be lonely. With no true buddy to explore the swamps and woods with. To ...

Thats really nice :D I like it. I am no poetry master so all I have to say is keep going. Sorry for the crap review XD

Hello Rose! Welcome to YWS. I am Genevieve. I think you have a right to not be called emo. You need to let the world know that! :D Bloody roses ...

I like it it need some work. I can see you just quickly did this. Maybe some more description. More pain... More intensity. Maybe you should space it deferentially here ...

That was nice. But is Hel a name or someone? I am kinda lost. I am not really good at poetry so I don't have any suggestions. But maybe you ...

That was so sweet!. never insulted me about anything. Well thats not true we all know that our parents have been mad or insulted us. I guess. Maybe you should ...

Thanks! :D What is confusing you? I tried to make the Woman and the Girl different so it was easier to read. Double space? Whey? No I don't know what ...

I didn't read your spoilers but I have only read the first one. Its a really good book! Its kinda cliched but I still really like it. Not much description ...

Thanks :D Next time we see each-other we can do that! Is the writing really good? I might consider studying them myself. To add a little more to my writing ...

I have seen those books around they look interesting and I think I read a few chapters of the first one. I just didn't have the money to buy 'em. ...