Gwenevire

Thanks! I will :D

This is a new game I came up with. I will try to explain it. Feel free to ask questions :D So. You know Those stupid looking signs like 'Coffee ...

I love you to Camille! :D Yay, a letter for me! I feel so special!

Fadalia Red Oak. "Whatever I want?" She snickered "I don't have to do anything. For all I care I could leave you here to die. But I thought it would ...

Username: 79% Its cool but it would be better the other way around like "Deep Dream" But its still nice :D Custom Title: 50% Wha? Avatar: 100% Its soothing. Country: ...

8/10 You don't like it?

Thanks Ayra. I don't know... Maybe this will be Gwenevire seeing herself get killed and that's how she gets brought into the other world. Yes! It shall be that XD ...

8/10 I like it. Snuffed XD But the last bit --Me in a dark mood and @(^_^)@ I don't like this bit! :lol:

4/10 At first it was good but then I didn't get it... :P

Fadalia Red Oak Fadalia snarled in pain as the wolf tore into her precious ear she was enraged by this and grabbed Flame by the neck in dominance. She caught ...

Oh that's okay :D I shall do that!

Its short yet sweet and almost full of goodness. It needs a bit of tweaking. Maybe you should extend it a bit :D Go into more detail about her feelings. ...

Thanks for the help XD Yes I did get the idea from you. I hope you don't mind... So no suggestions?

I like what you have added on. Keep going and you'll make me cry!

Hmm... Its a little to repetitive for me. Maybe you should find some way of adding it together instead of repeating it. like this : I’m sitting at a train ...