Gwenevire

Love it! Super good. Its so well done I can't say anything but.... Keep writing and add more description! Good work!

Well... Here I go :D

Ooh... A boy called you pretty! You know what that means

Thanks. I am going to take out this chapter and re write it. It was rushed and I think I had had a bad day... If you catch my drift! ...

Thats perfect! Its just what I need!

Moonlight Seagull Chapter 5 No no Romeo After school had ended Griffin offered to walk me home. I accepted and we began down the street in complete silence. Once we ...

Thank you all I will make the corrections right away! :D

Thanks! :D I did kinda notice that as well. I will do my best to avoid Bellaness. I guess I could make her less of a klutz. But what would ...

I limped slowly into the changing room still savoring that perfect moment with Griffin. I was so caught up in his beauty that I didn’t notice the two large scrapes ...

Eek. That must have killed. At least you will have an excuse not to go to school XD I have had a few accidents. Skiing and running. Gymnastics must have ...

7/10 I its okay. But its kinda hard to see. You guys its not about me not liking Halo its me not Loving MadHatter.

Thank you! I will have the next Chapter hopefully posted by tomorrow. We will see how it goes with Griffin and Sam. Who knows he may just be teasing her... ...

1. I like the trees. Its a bit fuzzy. But its comforting. I like there shadows and the cobble stones. 2. I like your angle. Its a bit dark. It ...

0/10 Mad. The whole site knows it. You hate me! So if you hate me so much don't talk to me!

Hey. I am Gwen. *scribbles* Nice user-name :D I can stay and chat if you like =] Tell us more about yourself. What do you like to write about etc. ...